CCLIV: Jen II
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Contrary to the last page, where I spent ages writing and rewriting and then cutting most of the dialogue, I didn’t even have to script this page. I moved right to thumbnailing the layout, letting the visuals tell the story. That really helped give me the freedom to choose what to put in each panel. I used Trom’s trajectory in the middle panel to guide the eye across and down to the bottom row. “Leading the eye around the page” is comic-making 101, but I still feel like an amateur on that point.
Read more UTC here - http://www.utc-comic.com
Join the Patreon campaign - http://www.patreon.com/catomix
UTC and all characters are owned by me.
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Contrary to the last page, where I spent ages writing and rewriting and then cutting most of the dialogue, I didn’t even have to script this page. I moved right to thumbnailing the layout, letting the visuals tell the story. That really helped give me the freedom to choose what to put in each panel. I used Trom’s trajectory in the middle panel to guide the eye across and down to the bottom row. “Leading the eye around the page” is comic-making 101, but I still feel like an amateur on that point.
Read more UTC here - http://www.utc-comic.com
Join the Patreon campaign - http://www.patreon.com/catomix
UTC and all characters are owned by me.
Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
Species Human
Size 750 x 1158px
File Size 548.6 kB
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