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The title probably gives away the meat of the story in some ways if you have read my previous works. Fear not though, this is by far in my opinion one of the best stories to date of a dragon facing the ultimate punishment for his acts. Poor little Igneous ;)
UPDATE
Anyone interested in having a go at drawing a scene out of this story is welcome to. You don't need my permission to try. I see a lot of my stories as a base to draw :)
The title probably gives away the meat of the story in some ways if you have read my previous works. Fear not though, this is by far in my opinion one of the best stories to date of a dragon facing the ultimate punishment for his acts. Poor little Igneous ;)
UPDATE
Anyone interested in having a go at drawing a scene out of this story is welcome to. You don't need my permission to try. I see a lot of my stories as a base to draw :)
Category Story / Paw
Species Western Dragon
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 35.5 kB
I must say, I was a little disappointed when I read "torture" and it turned out to be tickling. I was hoping for some actual torture distributed by a dragon. That aside, I noticed several errors, not spelling errors, but just using the wrong words in the wrong places. Ex: "heinous" rather than "highness", "know" instead of "no", etc. I also think that the dragons' reactions to Ingeneous's captivity certainly would not be a kind one. Dragons in general are very disdainful of humans to begin with, and mostly just consider them an annoyance. I know if I was a dragon I'd be pretty pissed off, and certainly wouldn't submit to tiny humans for any reason. That's just my opinion, but it's your story. You can write it however you want.
Heh, I sort of pity humans. I am part dragon myself but come from lands far away! Far out in space as a matter of fact! If humans ever try to enslave dragons I shall cull them to mere thousands XD. The humans that is. They really have to learn their place, they are a younger race with little claim on a world that isn't truly theirs with how badly they mistreat it. Good story, albeit humans need more poking and prodding, they're nothing short of children really XD
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