hehe here i have it were fighting with the girl shadow puppets picks up a bit more and a sudden change in Bayne's persoanlty that makes him go berzerk destroying everythign in his path with his power over fire of what it is that set him off so much you'll have to wait as see ^^ the last4 panels of my drawings was done by a buddy of mine who can draw better i coudlnt get the sicne right enoough to do it myself this is about as far as i have gotten to draw in my story so from here on i will be posting the comic much slowler but i hope you all like what i have done so far i will get more as soon as i can with life and all getting in the way @.@