Sexy...
X3

Does the eye up under the hair sit a bit high? Mine are always off, so I'm definitely no expert...
o.o;

Maybe... Or maybe her head's just tilted. I don't know.

if you want my opinion... the legs are very staright (my english sucks)... but im not a professional so....

I think the issue is not so much that they're straight, but that they're too long.

the kneel... has to be more visible...

I see.

Good work.

Thanks. :3

She has a very nice dress ^^ Her shoulders seem a bit too narrow compared to the rest of her and her right eye does seem a bit off but I'm not entirely sure how.

She has narrow shoulders to begin with, and her body is at an angle.
Her right eye is probably too high.

Thanks. :3

I thought she might be at an angle and it was perspective but wasn't sure. Just out of curiosity what's the significance of the 31 off to the left?

It's 18, and it's a signature of sorts.

nice. Flamboyant with the details.

Thank you. ^^

I really like her dress. and the colors are very well done =3

Thanks. :3

welcome =3

Great job on the dress and I like the new hair :3
I don't know how to say what I want to critique, so hopefully you're visual like me:
http://img709.imageshack.us/img709/...../sablehelp.png
Eyes are too high, and too far apart. The width between the eyes should equal the same width of one eye.
Muzzle needs more definition, too, I think. It looks flat otherwise.

Hope that helps. I'm going to email the SAI file I used to you so you can flip between the two images.

Thank you so much; I find visual help a lot better than written; I didn't want to ask for a redline though, let alone an edit.
Your version looks so much better; even if you say your art looks bad, I really want to be as good as you some day. I need lots of practice though. [/kiss-ass]

No need to send the file if you haven't already; I can flip through tabs just as easily.

I'm kinda disappointed in it. I'll keep your tips in mind for the future though. It's hard for me sometimes. What I draw and what I imagine come out so different; this was originally meant to be a picture of Tycho, but she ended up looking too old, so I had to go with Sable instead.

Also, you don't mind if I use the edited version as an avatar, do you?
I'll give credit where i can, of course.

Course not x3 Go ahead.

<3

Shes SEXY ^_-

Thanks. :3