For out Vampire:The Masquerade with ponies game. :)
Extra thanks to
Pentalis for help with the last verse.
Extra thanks to
Pentalis for help with the last verse.
Category Poetry / My Little Pony / Brony
Species Pony
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 577 B
Listed in Folders
Dang the last stanza got me off rhythm due to that first verse, I was reading the poem out loud and it flowed really well, but then that extra metric syllable kinda broke it.
How about...
A time of peace to which we trot. (grammar be damned)
No pity needed for our lot.
Keep your doors locked and windows drawn.
Our night is darkest before dawn.
8 metric syllables each and I think it flows better?
Sorry if I'm getting too deep into your poem, I can't nerd out about poetry with anyone else so I'm going ham with you <=P
You get a heart <3
How about...
A time of peace to which we trot. (grammar be damned)
No pity needed for our lot.
Keep your doors locked and windows drawn.
Our night is darkest before dawn.
8 metric syllables each and I think it flows better?
Sorry if I'm getting too deep into your poem, I can't nerd out about poetry with anyone else so I'm going ham with you <=P
You get a heart <3
I've been listening to Goth music and bands like Type O Negative almost my whole life. When I was in high school I had some Goth friends who introduced me to groups like The Cure and Siouxsie and the Banshees. I love darkwave and industrial as well as dark metal. As far as vampire stuff goes i've been a fan of Anne Rice's Lestat books since I was a kid and love the Queen of the Damned film & soundtrack. My current character is pretty much based on Lestat from that movie. She's a dark, gothy-rocker bard who despite being good still enjoys indulging in a pony's neck now and then. She only does it when it's consensual, though.
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