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Tall Grass - Part 4
by delta.dynamics
Digital 2D/3D Artist
5 years ago
Part 4 from ▶ 09. January 2021.
I've put together the last text-parts. Of course, the story isn't over, but that's my last idea for the story till now. I will continue with new content when I'm clear about what exactly will happen next (Action, Danger, violence, etc...). Bunny's and Alanis romance slowly unfolds here and I know you looking for this. Enjoy.
PART 1: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/39967466/
PART 2: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/39967487/
PART 3: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/39967510/
⚠ When and where does Tall Grass take place?
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/42726460/
I've put together the last text-parts. Of course, the story isn't over, but that's my last idea for the story till now. I will continue with new content when I'm clear about what exactly will happen next (Action, Danger, violence, etc...). Bunny's and Alanis romance slowly unfolds here and I know you looking for this. Enjoy.
PART 1: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/39967466/
PART 2: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/39967487/
PART 3: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/39967510/
⚠ When and where does Tall Grass take place?
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/42726460/
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You don't have to do big novels and writing down ideas don't let you forget them and it helps with the concept.
Also so far it is right in the standard format of the script - if remove intro with geopolitical information, you had first quarter for the first act - till the moment they took FTHR from Iso.
This is first half of second act - another ~25-30 pages where you put the tasty things. The heart of the story. I guess it will be till the Iso operation. And there might be troubles.
Then I guess something happen on Iso - another 25-30 pages, and something that move us to the third act - end of operation and tough decision what to do next, I guess. And more feels there)
Almost half there, and so far it seems to be intesting book which can easily be changed to movie script if needed.
I really enjoy it and wish you patience and enthusiasm to continue with the next chapters.
P.S. if you had different plans for story structure - ignore my forecast, I just red two books about story structure and had enough free time to create some stories on my own. Yet I have no idea what is next in your writings, and your gallery gives me some hints.
Looking forward for the next chapters!
I have no clue about writing. I've read a lot in the past and grow up with Stephen King and SciFi novels and I'm a huge movie fan. That's my knowledge of storytelling. During writing, I imagine it like a movie. I think that's why I tend to write a lot of dialogues and may forget to describe the environment and what the actors do.
Your forecast isn't that far fetched. They will go to Isu, doesn't matter if I like it or not. I wrote it, now I have to do it. What exactly will happen? I can't spoiler you, because I don't know it.
The pictures in the gallery can be a hint, but the ideas aren't story-based. More likely, it's reversed. I just want to draw some stuff :D
We will see where this is going, but the major theme should be some military tacticool sci-fi action, you know what I'm talking about, and yeah, Bunny related. It will be yiff free. I leave it to the readers imagination. There's enough porn out there.
I understand and agree with you, since I'm going by similar path. Intimacy might be without sexual context and I found that such scenes catch more interesting readers than horny things.
Yet I'm playing with the readers and bonk them then send them to a horny jail if they misread two previous books. Some people complains that there were clear signs that led them to horny path (and was not noticed to other readers) and as Aurelio Voltaire sang, 'Hell, I should know, I put it there!' XD
So yes, I'm too doing a clean story based on some pictures in my mind, and have to follow the events logic, but not my will. This is interesting journey, and again - wish you a happy journey with the plot. Waiting for another parts.
Bravo Author! BRAVO! You join the ranks of Anne McCaffrey and Robert Heinlein.
Looking forward to chapter 5.
(for us 50-somethings, can we have a black and white pdf? your signature style is hard to read for old eyes)
Creating the pdf and formatting is a lot of work too. Let's see how I can optimize the readability.
Tell me if you need someone to proof read, I have some experience with it.
https://www.furaffinity.net/journal/9933157/
I need a bit more time to write. Maybe around Christmas.
and i say that as some one who has a few projects sitting waiting for me to get back to them.