I...
hm.
It's very...unique?
Look, if you'd like my critique, I say to just start looking at other pictures, work on detail, because this pretty much looks nothing like my character. I'm not being rude, just suggesting you try to use guidelines and stuff like that. Start working on expression other than just smiles like that. Start practicing more, I can see you are getting a bit better, and you will get better each day once you practice. Trust me, I used to be...mediocre, then I got way better. And you can get better too. Just practice.

...On a side note, This is cute. :)
Thank you.