Exxcellent ^,.,^
LSU Press has a new book out by Roi Tartakovsky "Surprised by Sound" about the roles rhyme has played in various writings over the years B3

Thanks, and neat :)

I kinda like this one. It appears my preference is for your spooky-themed poems after all, it's only now dawning on me.
The rhymes are good, but I can't get the rhythm past the 2nd stanza. Have you ever considered reciting your poems and sharing the audio? That would help!

I do like writing spooky stuff. It's just difficult for me to force myself to write poems. I end up waiting until the mood strikes which could be whenever. That said I've been meaning to work on that. As far as rhythm goes if I don't end up writing while listening to music I end up with skewed poems that are tough to read. I do my best to read them out loud but sometimes if I'm tired I'll just say fuck it. That said I'll give this one a tweak.

Oh...I plan on getting some video equipment and posting some vids of me reading my poems. I just have to figure out some kind of recording area. I don't want people seeing how messy my bedroom is lol.

Haha well vids would be good, but y'know you can just post the audio too with a moving picture or just the audio waves, then you don't have to show your room c:

I think I'd get more attention via video plus I've been wanting to make my own vids anyways. That way if I ever manage to make a puppet version of Zid I can do funny little bits with them, etc.

very nice vocabulary

Thank you! <3

you're welcome^^