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A child from an orphanage has gotten involved with a gang of outlaws. A pair of volunteer caretakers and old friends rush to try rescuing the child before something terrible happens. Will they be able to?
This is my first dabbling into actual writing. I've always RPed, and I've been trying to improve my writing for the longest time. Now I've finally got the guts to write something on my own, and I'm trying to get it out to hopefully be able to share with other people. It's a big step for me, but I'm really hopeful you guys will like it! :)
This is my first dabbling into actual writing. I've always RPed, and I've been trying to improve my writing for the longest time. Now I've finally got the guts to write something on my own, and I'm trying to get it out to hopefully be able to share with other people. It's a big step for me, but I'm really hopeful you guys will like it! :)
Category Story / Pokemon
Species Pokemon
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 39 kB
This was a cute little story. The world felt real and the characters felt real too, though I shouldn't be surprised at your character writing being solid. It never felt like it dragged on too long, but it also didn't skimp on needed details. It really was nice. Keep it up.
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