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this is my entry in NSFW's contest-thingie. :3 this is how my 'sona, Alyx, found the egg-thing. :D it's my first story in forever, so please be nice. ;~; i know, my grammar sux bad, and there's probably a lot of spelling errors. >.>;
Category Story / General Furry Art
Species Dog (Other)
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 3.6 kB
There's spelling errors and things. But at least your story flowed well, and the first line managed to _catch_ my attention instead of scaring me away with overly verbose mishy-mosh (typically found in stories of guys who think they're good because they can use the thesaurus).
:} if you like to write, please keep on it.
:} if you like to write, please keep on it.
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