Well, here's the third chapter.

To be honest I've actually finished this months ago, but I wasn't really satisfied with it for many reasons. Mostly due to pacing, and the overall feel. I ended up redoing this chapter from the ground up at least twice. If anything I'm glad to get this off the ground and be done with it; it was like a roadblock on so many levels. But enough about that...

As always, questions, comments, and criticism are welcome.