If you've been watching me for a long time and know my gallery well (odds are you haven't and don't), you'll know I had the idea floating around for a long time of a story for Cyan becoming possessed by a demoness, specifically a succubus. Well, I finally commissioned none other than
NaruseWolf to bring the idea to corrupted life!
She's easily among the best I've commissioned, and not only worked faster than I can understand but made sure to provide WIPs and ask if any changes are needed often. Wonderful artist and a such a warm and sweet person, highly recommended!
Art:
NaruseWolf - you should rep her for the amazing work by by faving her submission rather than mine: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/45431270
Characters
Foxide
This work, made by another artist, will be moved to my scraps in a few days.
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Cyan: Lost a bet and was forced to travel to a long-abandoned mansion, one that was thought to be haunted. He was made to promise photos as proof, so with no choice he made off with a friend. But the mansion holds a much worse horror than mere ghosts...
Xereda, evicted succubus spirit: Xereda had been doing moderately well for herself in the circles of hell. That ended when she was ordered to kill her lover. In truth her growing power was seen as a threat by her superiors, and this was a way to put her back in her place. When Xereda refused she was convicted of insubordination and banished from the circles of hell. With nowhere else to go, she went to the mortal realm, but even then the celestial wards meant that she could only exist in spirit form. She entered the portal a number of mortal years ago, but found herself tethered to the grounds of the abandoned mansion.
After thorough investigation and testing that any mortal would find distressing, she had found a loophole in the celestial wards...
The Present
This was Cyan's first urban exploration, and he decided with his friend Aedryn to split up, and made the ill-advised decision of exploring the second floor while his friend explored the basement. The building was in terrible condition, and due to poor judgement Cyan stood on a piece of flooring that collapsed, breaking his leg. Unable to walk and in too much pain to move, Aedryn heard the commotion and rushed over. The room darkened unnaturally, a stench of sulphur filled the air, and a feeling malice and dread overtook it. From the shadows emerged the apparition of its source: A wispy, purple figure with a cruel visage that oozed evil, sending Aedryn running. Cyan wasn't so lucky, in his injured state, and was forced to face the demoness.
"Well, it appears you're in a spot of trouble, doesn't it?" the demoness spoke, her voice in spite of its casual nonchalance and amusement, overflowing with a creeping malintent.
"W-who are you?" Cyan asked fearfully between teeth clenched with pain, his leg aflame with agony.
The spirit raised her arms theatrically as she lingered around Cyan. "I'm the only saviour you'll ever need, or have! I'm your only hope, and you're mine." she ended with a pause, her back to Cyan. With a backwards look over her shoulder and an effortless flick of her hand, Cyan's cellphone slipped out of its pocket, lifted several feet into the air, and with a CRUNCH it snapped in two. "Oh dear, your phone broke too... Looks like you won't be calling anyone for help."
Disclaimer: I do not have any beef with anyone or any character named Aedryn, and any resemblence to any character or person and usage of this name is purely coincidental. I had to name him something, you know? *shrug*
NaruseWolf to bring the idea to corrupted life!She's easily among the best I've commissioned, and not only worked faster than I can understand but made sure to provide WIPs and ask if any changes are needed often. Wonderful artist and a such a warm and sweet person, highly recommended!
Art:
NaruseWolf - you should rep her for the amazing work by by faving her submission rather than mine: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/45431270Characters
FoxideThis work, made by another artist, will be moved to my scraps in a few days.
<<< PREV | FIRST | NEXT >>>
Read on for little context/story bits and narration...
Cyan: Lost a bet and was forced to travel to a long-abandoned mansion, one that was thought to be haunted. He was made to promise photos as proof, so with no choice he made off with a friend. But the mansion holds a much worse horror than mere ghosts...
Xereda, evicted succubus spirit: Xereda had been doing moderately well for herself in the circles of hell. That ended when she was ordered to kill her lover. In truth her growing power was seen as a threat by her superiors, and this was a way to put her back in her place. When Xereda refused she was convicted of insubordination and banished from the circles of hell. With nowhere else to go, she went to the mortal realm, but even then the celestial wards meant that she could only exist in spirit form. She entered the portal a number of mortal years ago, but found herself tethered to the grounds of the abandoned mansion.
After thorough investigation and testing that any mortal would find distressing, she had found a loophole in the celestial wards...
The Present
This was Cyan's first urban exploration, and he decided with his friend Aedryn to split up, and made the ill-advised decision of exploring the second floor while his friend explored the basement. The building was in terrible condition, and due to poor judgement Cyan stood on a piece of flooring that collapsed, breaking his leg. Unable to walk and in too much pain to move, Aedryn heard the commotion and rushed over. The room darkened unnaturally, a stench of sulphur filled the air, and a feeling malice and dread overtook it. From the shadows emerged the apparition of its source: A wispy, purple figure with a cruel visage that oozed evil, sending Aedryn running. Cyan wasn't so lucky, in his injured state, and was forced to face the demoness.
"Well, it appears you're in a spot of trouble, doesn't it?" the demoness spoke, her voice in spite of its casual nonchalance and amusement, overflowing with a creeping malintent.
"W-who are you?" Cyan asked fearfully between teeth clenched with pain, his leg aflame with agony.
The spirit raised her arms theatrically as she lingered around Cyan. "I'm the only saviour you'll ever need, or have! I'm your only hope, and you're mine." she ended with a pause, her back to Cyan. With a backwards look over her shoulder and an effortless flick of her hand, Cyan's cellphone slipped out of its pocket, lifted several feet into the air, and with a CRUNCH it snapped in two. "Oh dear, your phone broke too... Looks like you won't be calling anyone for help."
Disclaimer: I do not have any beef with anyone or any character named Aedryn, and any resemblence to any character or person and usage of this name is purely coincidental. I had to name him something, you know? *shrug*
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Really? Not bad for something I pulled out of my ass over a few hours!
But seriously, thank you for the comment, I wasn't sure if people would even read it haha. Maybe I could clean it up and make a better version of the story all in one place.
Honestly never thought of myself as much of a writer, I worry a lot about my writing style becoming repetitive.
But seriously, thank you for the comment, I wasn't sure if people would even read it haha. Maybe I could clean it up and make a better version of the story all in one place.
Honestly never thought of myself as much of a writer, I worry a lot about my writing style becoming repetitive.
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