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The hyena noticed your stare, not acting the least bit surprised when he caught your eyes roaming over his muscular chest and ripped stomach. The grin he gave you looked downright suggestive even. He relaxed his posture slightly, invitingly, and before you realized what you were doing you had come over to him like a moth drawn to flame.
Your paws roamed over his chest, caressed the tight belly that had been so well taken care of and presented for your viewing pleasure. All the while the hyena looked down at you with the same confident, maybe even a little dominant gaze. You wanted to bury your face into his stomach, or to get that vest off of him, but no, not here in public. You did steal a gaze down the hyena's belly, getting a tantalizing peek at the black skin covering what you could tell was a sizable piece of hyena meat.
You finally pay attention to the hyena's face again, and start to ask him if he'd like a drink, but he stops you, putting a paw over your lips. "Sorry, I've never been interested in being with anyone. I do appreciate the attention though, and thanks for the bellyrub. You can give me as many of those as you want, if you like..."
You're so confused what's just happened that by the time you recover your senses he's already gone. You'd gotten your hopes up, all for nothing! That jerk! He was nothing but the world's worst tease!
Avereth may indeed be a shy hyena, but he also has an almost narcissistic streak in him that can at times make him act downright suggestive to amuse himself by enjoying getting attention from others with no plans whatsoever to get in a relationship with them - he is asexual after all. He doesn't only wear an open vest and loose pants because he's had them forever: he's proud of his body and more than willing to show it off on his more confident or upbeat days. He'll let you look, maybe even touch - but don't get your hopes up on getting into his pants!
You'd managed to find him again, and repeated the process of staring, this time openly. The irritation of the hyena putting himself on display yet not letting anyone have him must have been obvious because he suddenly came over to your side, leaned over, and began to whisper in your ear.
'I'm sorry, I didn't realize I'd offended you so much yesterday. I really did appreciate the attention and I'd hoped you had enjoyed it as well. Come on, I'll make it up to you since you seem to like looking at me so much. I can't promise I'll do everything you might want with you, but I think we'll both enjoy ourselves. It's only just this once though; I really prefer a no strings attached deal.'
You found yourself agreeing like a person hitting the accept button on a digital agreement, the desires of yesterday filling your head even more powerfully than the last time. Your gaze wasn't just looking now, you were going to have what you were looking at now! The hyena led you to the parking lot like a lost puppy and you followed him home eagerly.
He had a nice place, nothing too modest but not overly decorated. The hyena looked absolutely excited now where before he'd definitely been concealing his emotions with no small amount of skill. You liked the way he was looking at you; there were equal parts eagerness, dominance, possessiveness, and hesitation in it. You finally learned his name and exchanged pleasantries with him. It was obvious he was planning some sort of dinner date with you first.
The food was good; he clearly knew what he was doing. You probably ate more than you should have, feeling very full, but the hyena himself had only eaten a little bit. Gazing at the strong chest, you knew he probably had to be careful not to eat too much. He finally got up and gestured up the stairs, still showing a bit of hesitation on top of all the others emotions he was exhibiting. It was almost cute seeing the nervousness. Maybe he really didn't do this sort of thing at all normally. He seemed to come across as dominant but that may have only been a part of him he put on display in public. Either that or he was just shy, which you found immensely appealing given how clearly strong and fit he was. He looked like the type to be a jerk but this was definitely a case of finding a gem in the pile.
Soon you were both in his room, and the hyena even closed and locked the door, which you couldn't help but laugh over.
He replied 'Sorry, I'm not used to this sort of thing, I couldn't try anything without closing it like that, I hope you don't mind...'
He really looked like he was sorry about it too, what with how his ears were drooping. It was adorable. You came over behind him and put your arms around him, one paw feeling his chest again while the other ventured over his belly and trailed over the muscles there. He moaned slightly when your finger briefly ventured down into his navel and rubbed it in a gentle circular motion.
He veritably melted in your arms when you did that and the tension was completely gone from him. He put on a mischievous grin and pulled off his vest, and you took the cue and started taking your own clothes off as well. Soon both of you were wearing nothing at all, and everything that had been out of view before was living entirely up to your hopes. Strangely the hyena didn't seem as aroused as he should be, showing only a little excitement down there where you were already obviously fully ready.
That didn't last long as you both sat on the bed exploring one another's bodies and went for his long dark skinned sheath. He looked almost worried for a moment but relaxed back and let you entice the darkmember out of its covering, and he couldn't even keep quiet once you had it down in your mouth and soon tugged by throat. He lasted quite a while given his clear inexperience, but with his growling and tensing stomach you knew what was coming and were soon swallowing a the heavy load that emerged. He must not have taken care of his urges in a while!
The hyena was more than willing to return the favor, though it was obvious he didn't know what he was doing, but he was a fast learner and soon both of you were happily satisfied. It was then that his stomach started growling heavily, sensing the small addition the hyena's attention to you had given it, and you couldn't help but laugh. You started to ask if he wanted to take things further, but he silenced you again.
'I'm afraid that's too far for me to go, though this was rather nice. It was very enjoyable and I'll miss the attention you gave me.'
You were about to ask why you couldn't just keep seeing him like this when he gently put a paw over your chest and eased you back slightly. You looked at him questioningly a moment before he put his arms around you in a hug. It was enjoyable until his jaws suddenly gaped open and the rows of his ivory fangs flew past your vision. The wet slime of his throat was suddenly covering your head and he was holding your arms to your side now. You did try to fight back, of course, but there was simply no dislodging the powerful hyena's grip.
Inch by horrifying in you were pressed deeper and deeper into his body, surrounded by feeling and sounds you never wanted to experience. The wetness, the pervasive heat and claustrophobic tightness, as well as the sounds of his breathings and heartbeat violated your senses, and you could hear the infernal growling of the predator's stomach, calling out for what you realized was you. The hyena's tongue trailed over your belly and settled for disturbingly long in your belly button, but then he was swallowing again, not even giving any mind to what was between your legs sliding over his tongue.
By the time your head entered his stomach you were light headed and feeling weak, but the smell of digested meat was terrible and shocked you into lucidity again. The walls quivered and pulsed disgustingly all around your face, and soon more of you slithered into the furnacelike organ until you were curled into a tight ball and hardly able to even move. You kicked and pushed while you could, but it only made slight groaning bulges in the hyena's stretch belly hide, and soon you were too weak to do anything but twitch. You belatedly realized you were dying, and that his stomach would digest you, and no one would ever see you again... The last thing you heard was a rumbling burp that tensed the whole stomach.
The hyena was leaning back on the bed, a look of pure bliss on his face as his hands caressed his enormous belly. Where before there had been bulging abdominal muscles was now only a vague outline of the form curled within his stomach, no longer kicking but still twitching delightfully. He was so full his navel was bulging out, and he'd become aroused again as well. He rested back and simply fell asleep, the meat in his belly falling still finally.
The very few who have been taken by the hyena to more private settings and even gotten an intimate taste of his essence always end up being overpowered, those muscles used against them, and conveniently already unclothed they are dispatched down his throat, pounding the walls of his belly as his abdominals bulge out around their form and lose their definition. The pounding always slows down and eventually stops, and the growling of his stomach is replaced by gentle churning as he relaxes and lets his body do its work.
A few days of a most intimate form of contact and most of their body has been churned though his own and become a part of his physique, and he's off to the gym to work off the slight layer of fat his latest date gave him, all the while attracting more attention to his body and beginning the process of selecting a compatible target for his next outing in a few weeks.
If his stomach is still slightly swollen, were one to feel it they would sense something round and solid shifting beneath the layer of muscle, his meal's skull or other large bones still breaking down in the powerful acids of his gut. He also has a stash of skulls that he coughed back up, but no one will ever see that except the empty eye sockets of a few of his most favorite past meals.
Editing of original image was done in Gimp and M$ Paint to correct a few proportions and some anatomy stuff. Also smoothed out some colors and modified patterning. I'd have hiked his pants up a little higher if I could have since they're so far down you really should be seeing a fair bit of the top few inches of Avereth's you-know-what, but that would have been too hard to do without really obvious digital edits on the traditional scan.

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The hyena noticed your stare, not acting the least bit surprised when he caught your eyes roaming over his muscular chest and ripped stomach. The grin he gave you looked downright suggestive even. He relaxed his posture slightly, invitingly, and before you realized what you were doing you had come over to him like a moth drawn to flame.
Your paws roamed over his chest, caressed the tight belly that had been so well taken care of and presented for your viewing pleasure. All the while the hyena looked down at you with the same confident, maybe even a little dominant gaze. You wanted to bury your face into his stomach, or to get that vest off of him, but no, not here in public. You did steal a gaze down the hyena's belly, getting a tantalizing peek at the black skin covering what you could tell was a sizable piece of hyena meat.
You finally pay attention to the hyena's face again, and start to ask him if he'd like a drink, but he stops you, putting a paw over your lips. "Sorry, I've never been interested in being with anyone. I do appreciate the attention though, and thanks for the bellyrub. You can give me as many of those as you want, if you like..."
You're so confused what's just happened that by the time you recover your senses he's already gone. You'd gotten your hopes up, all for nothing! That jerk! He was nothing but the world's worst tease!
Avereth may indeed be a shy hyena, but he also has an almost narcissistic streak in him that can at times make him act downright suggestive to amuse himself by enjoying getting attention from others with no plans whatsoever to get in a relationship with them - he is asexual after all. He doesn't only wear an open vest and loose pants because he's had them forever: he's proud of his body and more than willing to show it off on his more confident or upbeat days. He'll let you look, maybe even touch - but don't get your hopes up on getting into his pants!
*Extra Adult Content*You'd managed to find him again, and repeated the process of staring, this time openly. The irritation of the hyena putting himself on display yet not letting anyone have him must have been obvious because he suddenly came over to your side, leaned over, and began to whisper in your ear.
'I'm sorry, I didn't realize I'd offended you so much yesterday. I really did appreciate the attention and I'd hoped you had enjoyed it as well. Come on, I'll make it up to you since you seem to like looking at me so much. I can't promise I'll do everything you might want with you, but I think we'll both enjoy ourselves. It's only just this once though; I really prefer a no strings attached deal.'
You found yourself agreeing like a person hitting the accept button on a digital agreement, the desires of yesterday filling your head even more powerfully than the last time. Your gaze wasn't just looking now, you were going to have what you were looking at now! The hyena led you to the parking lot like a lost puppy and you followed him home eagerly.
He had a nice place, nothing too modest but not overly decorated. The hyena looked absolutely excited now where before he'd definitely been concealing his emotions with no small amount of skill. You liked the way he was looking at you; there were equal parts eagerness, dominance, possessiveness, and hesitation in it. You finally learned his name and exchanged pleasantries with him. It was obvious he was planning some sort of dinner date with you first.
The food was good; he clearly knew what he was doing. You probably ate more than you should have, feeling very full, but the hyena himself had only eaten a little bit. Gazing at the strong chest, you knew he probably had to be careful not to eat too much. He finally got up and gestured up the stairs, still showing a bit of hesitation on top of all the others emotions he was exhibiting. It was almost cute seeing the nervousness. Maybe he really didn't do this sort of thing at all normally. He seemed to come across as dominant but that may have only been a part of him he put on display in public. Either that or he was just shy, which you found immensely appealing given how clearly strong and fit he was. He looked like the type to be a jerk but this was definitely a case of finding a gem in the pile.
Soon you were both in his room, and the hyena even closed and locked the door, which you couldn't help but laugh over.
He replied 'Sorry, I'm not used to this sort of thing, I couldn't try anything without closing it like that, I hope you don't mind...'
He really looked like he was sorry about it too, what with how his ears were drooping. It was adorable. You came over behind him and put your arms around him, one paw feeling his chest again while the other ventured over his belly and trailed over the muscles there. He moaned slightly when your finger briefly ventured down into his navel and rubbed it in a gentle circular motion.
He veritably melted in your arms when you did that and the tension was completely gone from him. He put on a mischievous grin and pulled off his vest, and you took the cue and started taking your own clothes off as well. Soon both of you were wearing nothing at all, and everything that had been out of view before was living entirely up to your hopes. Strangely the hyena didn't seem as aroused as he should be, showing only a little excitement down there where you were already obviously fully ready.
That didn't last long as you both sat on the bed exploring one another's bodies and went for his long dark skinned sheath. He looked almost worried for a moment but relaxed back and let you entice the darkmember out of its covering, and he couldn't even keep quiet once you had it down in your mouth and soon tugged by throat. He lasted quite a while given his clear inexperience, but with his growling and tensing stomach you knew what was coming and were soon swallowing a the heavy load that emerged. He must not have taken care of his urges in a while!
The hyena was more than willing to return the favor, though it was obvious he didn't know what he was doing, but he was a fast learner and soon both of you were happily satisfied. It was then that his stomach started growling heavily, sensing the small addition the hyena's attention to you had given it, and you couldn't help but laugh. You started to ask if he wanted to take things further, but he silenced you again.
'I'm afraid that's too far for me to go, though this was rather nice. It was very enjoyable and I'll miss the attention you gave me.'
*Extra Vore Content*You were about to ask why you couldn't just keep seeing him like this when he gently put a paw over your chest and eased you back slightly. You looked at him questioningly a moment before he put his arms around you in a hug. It was enjoyable until his jaws suddenly gaped open and the rows of his ivory fangs flew past your vision. The wet slime of his throat was suddenly covering your head and he was holding your arms to your side now. You did try to fight back, of course, but there was simply no dislodging the powerful hyena's grip.
Inch by horrifying in you were pressed deeper and deeper into his body, surrounded by feeling and sounds you never wanted to experience. The wetness, the pervasive heat and claustrophobic tightness, as well as the sounds of his breathings and heartbeat violated your senses, and you could hear the infernal growling of the predator's stomach, calling out for what you realized was you. The hyena's tongue trailed over your belly and settled for disturbingly long in your belly button, but then he was swallowing again, not even giving any mind to what was between your legs sliding over his tongue.
By the time your head entered his stomach you were light headed and feeling weak, but the smell of digested meat was terrible and shocked you into lucidity again. The walls quivered and pulsed disgustingly all around your face, and soon more of you slithered into the furnacelike organ until you were curled into a tight ball and hardly able to even move. You kicked and pushed while you could, but it only made slight groaning bulges in the hyena's stretch belly hide, and soon you were too weak to do anything but twitch. You belatedly realized you were dying, and that his stomach would digest you, and no one would ever see you again... The last thing you heard was a rumbling burp that tensed the whole stomach.
The hyena was leaning back on the bed, a look of pure bliss on his face as his hands caressed his enormous belly. Where before there had been bulging abdominal muscles was now only a vague outline of the form curled within his stomach, no longer kicking but still twitching delightfully. He was so full his navel was bulging out, and he'd become aroused again as well. He rested back and simply fell asleep, the meat in his belly falling still finally.
The very few who have been taken by the hyena to more private settings and even gotten an intimate taste of his essence always end up being overpowered, those muscles used against them, and conveniently already unclothed they are dispatched down his throat, pounding the walls of his belly as his abdominals bulge out around their form and lose their definition. The pounding always slows down and eventually stops, and the growling of his stomach is replaced by gentle churning as he relaxes and lets his body do its work.
A few days of a most intimate form of contact and most of their body has been churned though his own and become a part of his physique, and he's off to the gym to work off the slight layer of fat his latest date gave him, all the while attracting more attention to his body and beginning the process of selecting a compatible target for his next outing in a few weeks.
If his stomach is still slightly swollen, were one to feel it they would sense something round and solid shifting beneath the layer of muscle, his meal's skull or other large bones still breaking down in the powerful acids of his gut. He also has a stash of skulls that he coughed back up, but no one will ever see that except the empty eye sockets of a few of his most favorite past meals.
Editing of original image was done in Gimp and M$ Paint to correct a few proportions and some anatomy stuff. Also smoothed out some colors and modified patterning. I'd have hiked his pants up a little higher if I could have since they're so far down you really should be seeing a fair bit of the top few inches of Avereth's you-know-what, but that would have been too hard to do without really obvious digital edits on the traditional scan.
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That would take quite a bit of work! You'd probably have to get him to eat a significant amount of meat, and since he's a hyena that would be quite expensive. Then you'd have to put in a large enough amount of cuddle time afterward to get him relaxed and tired(I call it a food coma XD ). He does indeed enjoy bellyrubs and being petted in general. You might be able to get your hands on it then, but take any part too fast and you blow your chances! :P
Ooh, I need to use those as a tool to convert people to liking navels. Still, if they at least open others up to giving him some attention there simply because he likes it then my job is done, though I have a feeling it would be a stretch to get others actually wanting to be devoured through there. X3
Though it does make smooshing people's faces to his belly all the more amusing simply knowing that he could do it. :3
Though it does make smooshing people's faces to his belly all the more amusing simply knowing that he could do it. :3
I love every time someone wants to meet a Remali. :)
Avereth can do that and even CV, but I don't often have him do so since even same size oral vore feels like a bit of a stretch.(oh god another vore joke)
Also I updated the story with more as a writing exercise so there's more for you to enjoy now.
Avereth can do that and even CV, but I don't often have him do so since even same size oral vore feels like a bit of a stretch.(oh god another vore joke)
Also I updated the story with more as a writing exercise so there's more for you to enjoy now.
I like to roleplay but due to my level of writing I have an extremely high benchmark for skill most people can't reach.
I don't want to come across as elitist in saying that at all, but I need similarly skilled partners or I can't get any enjoyment out of it myself. X3
I don't want to come across as elitist in saying that at all, but I need similarly skilled partners or I can't get any enjoyment out of it myself. X3
Unfortunately no. :(
Stuff I'm involved in tends to be measured in paragraphs because everyone I RP with is capable of writing stories on their own already. In fact all of my serious RPs so far are turned into actual stories now. I like posting up what I roleplay.
Stuff I'm involved in tends to be measured in paragraphs because everyone I RP with is capable of writing stories on their own already. In fact all of my serious RPs so far are turned into actual stories now. I like posting up what I roleplay.
The only discernible difference between my casual RP and serious RP is that serious RP involves a lot of collaborative planning beforehand and is posted the same as story format. Casual RP often remain in first person, has little to no planning, and uses the * symbol around actions. I'm digging up an example that's only casual to post to your other reply, though it's a bit longer than usual.
Excerpt of last post I made in a non-serious RP
*As the hyena waits he finally feels some coherence forming from his friend within him, surely disoriented after being plucked apart cell by very cell and spread out all over the hyena's body, though most of the lion's mass was still almost entirely settled within his midriff. While it might be an interesting idle amusement for the lion to be evenly spread throughout the hyena, he figured the thing he wanted Mitch to experience most intimately was what it was like to feel the sensations of the hyena's gut, what it was like to *eat* as a hyena. That, he felt, was what Mitch would want to experience the most, not as an outsider but as a very involved part of the entire process! Avereth felt a sudden pain in his stomach as it realized it was no longer full, churning against itself still >>
trying to process the bulk of meat that was no longer there. Avereth knew that however much he was feeling it, Mitch was feeling it even more since so much of him was situated in the very walls of the digestive organ. The enlarged stomach groaned powerfully for meat, and the hyena was ready to oblige it and treat Mitch to a meal quite unlike any he'd ever experienced before! The hyena conjured up all manner of spiced meats, graced with oriental and Indian spices, steaming as is just roasted, juices and fatty grease dripping off of them. The scent drove the hyena's hunger crazy, and he felt sure he could almost feel Mitch heaving about with it desperate to contain that meat and digest it too! He was all too happy to begin cramming his wide muzzle with gluttonous mouthfuls, minimally >>
even chewing before tossing it down to the darkness of his belly. Mitch would feel the lumps of meat entering and filling the stomach, gradually swelling it out and giving it something to grind against as rivulets of saliva drained out of the salivating hyena's throat and lubricated the whole mass, even as Mitch would feel himself secreting mucus and stomach acids to break down the food. It was at this time Jeremy decided to appear and without asking dove into the pile of food, though Avereth didn't mind the entertainment of watching the little guy eating whole sausages and nibbling on every little thing. His little eyes glanced over at Avereth, hovering for a while before he said "Geez, someone's turning into a fat-yena, and I thought I knew how much you could eat by now!" Avereth >>
threw a chicken leg at him, which the meerkat snatched and gulped down before laughing and diving back into the midst of the pile of meat. Avereth resumed his feast for two, and soon his newly larger stomach was comfortably bloated with meat, churning around nicely and surely being savored even now by Mitch who had the luck to still get to be in direct contact with the savory treats! The hyena wasn't quite done yet though...His sharp eyes picked out what he was looking for, and with a lightning quick snatch the experienced hunter had Jeremy by the foot, the meerkat slowed by his quite plump belly. With a yelp Jeremy was spinning through the air and dropped headfirst into the gaping jaws, his tongue almost pulling the meerkat deeper on his own! Well, perhaps there was a little of >>
Mitch in there too! The kicking bulge swelling his throat quickly slipped behind his ribcage out of sight before his stomach let out a protesting groan at the additional occupant unceremoniously slopping down into the increasing slushy mass sopping in the stomach juices. Avereth let out a satisfied groat at the tightness of his belly and decided to settle into the jacuzzi to relax in the warm heat and let his meal settle for a bit, quite literally.
*As the hyena waits he finally feels some coherence forming from his friend within him, surely disoriented after being plucked apart cell by very cell and spread out all over the hyena's body, though most of the lion's mass was still almost entirely settled within his midriff. While it might be an interesting idle amusement for the lion to be evenly spread throughout the hyena, he figured the thing he wanted Mitch to experience most intimately was what it was like to feel the sensations of the hyena's gut, what it was like to *eat* as a hyena. That, he felt, was what Mitch would want to experience the most, not as an outsider but as a very involved part of the entire process! Avereth felt a sudden pain in his stomach as it realized it was no longer full, churning against itself still >>
trying to process the bulk of meat that was no longer there. Avereth knew that however much he was feeling it, Mitch was feeling it even more since so much of him was situated in the very walls of the digestive organ. The enlarged stomach groaned powerfully for meat, and the hyena was ready to oblige it and treat Mitch to a meal quite unlike any he'd ever experienced before! The hyena conjured up all manner of spiced meats, graced with oriental and Indian spices, steaming as is just roasted, juices and fatty grease dripping off of them. The scent drove the hyena's hunger crazy, and he felt sure he could almost feel Mitch heaving about with it desperate to contain that meat and digest it too! He was all too happy to begin cramming his wide muzzle with gluttonous mouthfuls, minimally >>
even chewing before tossing it down to the darkness of his belly. Mitch would feel the lumps of meat entering and filling the stomach, gradually swelling it out and giving it something to grind against as rivulets of saliva drained out of the salivating hyena's throat and lubricated the whole mass, even as Mitch would feel himself secreting mucus and stomach acids to break down the food. It was at this time Jeremy decided to appear and without asking dove into the pile of food, though Avereth didn't mind the entertainment of watching the little guy eating whole sausages and nibbling on every little thing. His little eyes glanced over at Avereth, hovering for a while before he said "Geez, someone's turning into a fat-yena, and I thought I knew how much you could eat by now!" Avereth >>
threw a chicken leg at him, which the meerkat snatched and gulped down before laughing and diving back into the midst of the pile of meat. Avereth resumed his feast for two, and soon his newly larger stomach was comfortably bloated with meat, churning around nicely and surely being savored even now by Mitch who had the luck to still get to be in direct contact with the savory treats! The hyena wasn't quite done yet though...His sharp eyes picked out what he was looking for, and with a lightning quick snatch the experienced hunter had Jeremy by the foot, the meerkat slowed by his quite plump belly. With a yelp Jeremy was spinning through the air and dropped headfirst into the gaping jaws, his tongue almost pulling the meerkat deeper on his own! Well, perhaps there was a little of >>
Mitch in there too! The kicking bulge swelling his throat quickly slipped behind his ribcage out of sight before his stomach let out a protesting groan at the additional occupant unceremoniously slopping down into the increasing slushy mass sopping in the stomach juices. Avereth let out a satisfied groat at the tightness of his belly and decided to settle into the jacuzzi to relax in the warm heat and let his meal settle for a bit, quite literally.
Jesus Christ! And you never have small RPs, like this? (example post of mine):
Silent moans a bit as you strip off his one-piece skinsuit. "Ohhhh...", he moans, as you grope and caress his warm body, licking him a bit. "Mmmm... This one must taste pretty good, huh?", he asks, smiling and shuddering a bit as you start to paw him off, his cock already out of it's genital slit from all the attention. He has internal testicles.
Silent moans a bit as you strip off his one-piece skinsuit. "Ohhhh...", he moans, as you grope and caress his warm body, licking him a bit. "Mmmm... This one must taste pretty good, huh?", he asks, smiling and shuddering a bit as you start to paw him off, his cock already out of it's genital slit from all the attention. He has internal testicles.
To be fair, the person I was doing that one with is the same one I made a 91 page story with at one point...and it was a fairly long segment. I did actually scare someone off with a 3 paragraph opening post once though. X3
One thing I've found that adds quite a bit to post content is to simply add all of a character's thoughts into a post. So many people never do it and as a result you never come to really know their character better, and their posts always end up far shorter too. I think an important quality in anyone is to be open to the possibility of learning to adapt their writing through observation of another. In fact, in the story in my gallery called 'The New Assistant' my partner started out with small posts but by the end was managing to often match my own!
I guess you could say that when I RP I have the goal of making a story out of it. If I'm going to put so much time and effort into it then I want it to have a lot of content and be a good read. I've apparently helped improve everyone's writing that has RP'ed with me extensively. The giant posts I often make can only result from my partner making a large previous post as well. Each person's posts act as the foundation for the next, and you can only expand so much further than the other's last post, so a balance is always going on.
If I am to RP with anyone new they need to have a willingness to learn and adapt, as well as be involved in discussion about the RP that can lead to making it larger and more interesting.
One thing I've found that adds quite a bit to post content is to simply add all of a character's thoughts into a post. So many people never do it and as a result you never come to really know their character better, and their posts always end up far shorter too. I think an important quality in anyone is to be open to the possibility of learning to adapt their writing through observation of another. In fact, in the story in my gallery called 'The New Assistant' my partner started out with small posts but by the end was managing to often match my own!
I guess you could say that when I RP I have the goal of making a story out of it. If I'm going to put so much time and effort into it then I want it to have a lot of content and be a good read. I've apparently helped improve everyone's writing that has RP'ed with me extensively. The giant posts I often make can only result from my partner making a large previous post as well. Each person's posts act as the foundation for the next, and you can only expand so much further than the other's last post, so a balance is always going on.
If I am to RP with anyone new they need to have a willingness to learn and adapt, as well as be involved in discussion about the RP that can lead to making it larger and more interesting.
Well, to be honest when I really enjoy an RP, my posts get longer and longer, so maybe if we RPed, I'd end up matching your posts as well! And I do try to include what my character is thinking, although I usually don't include all of it. If we do RP, and you don't like it, we could always just stop.
My RPs tend to really dive into the developing relationship between the characters involved as you have probably seen, and generally both myself and my partner really get pulled into the RP and the emotions between the characters. If you're able to adapt to how the content tends to grow it might actually end up some of the most enjoyable RP you've ever had. But part of that depends on talking to you enough beforehand to know what things your character really likes and what turns them on. I can use that to play to their interests in an RP setting.
And you might want to consider including everything he thinks! As long as it's not useless extra I try to include every movement, smell, taste, physical sensation, thought, and emotion that I can. :)
And you might want to consider including everything he thinks! As long as it's not useless extra I try to include every movement, smell, taste, physical sensation, thought, and emotion that I can. :)
You'll have to catch me in an RP mood of course, I tend to flit back and forth between various things. I also have a few friends who haven't gotten to RP with me in forever I'll have to catch up with eventually.
I'm actually going to be in the process of moving very soon as well, so my availability is a bit limit at the moment. X3
I'm actually going to be in the process of moving very soon as well, so my availability is a bit limit at the moment. X3
OK! Here is my character page: http://www.f-list.net/c/Silent-Hunter/
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lincard1000 is the creator of the Vanguard species.
Here are refs for Silent-Hunter. They aren't of him, except the first one, but they do give a good picture of what the race looks like:
Head: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3035994/
Arms/chest: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2857134/
Belly/legs/cock: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2172399/
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lincard1000 is the creator of the Vanguard species.Here are refs for Silent-Hunter. They aren't of him, except the first one, but they do give a good picture of what the race looks like:
Head: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/3035994/
Arms/chest: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2857134/
Belly/legs/cock: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2172399/
See I had no idea they have 4 arms, that is important information to learn. XD
I'm busy packing up stuff in preparation for moving, but I'll probably have to read that guy's stories about them as a bit of study material for the race when I get the chance.
I'm busy packing up stuff in preparation for moving, but I'll probably have to read that guy's stories about them as a bit of study material for the race when I get the chance.
We'll have to get him out on the beach more often, sunning himself outside, hiking, and working out while outdoors more often then. Lots of chances to get a glipse of his pale belly fur then. :3
I admit I already imagined some lust crazed person ripping his pants open while he's in that position and having their hands/mouth around his you-know-what while he's looking down with this 'what the fuck!?' expression, his arms about ready to pry them off himself - though that then changes to a look indicating he's been distracted by what the mouth is doing. XD
I admit I already imagined some lust crazed person ripping his pants open while he's in that position and having their hands/mouth around his you-know-what while he's looking down with this 'what the fuck!?' expression, his arms about ready to pry them off himself - though that then changes to a look indicating he's been distracted by what the mouth is doing. XD
That side of Ave has never come out in public before yet. XD
It would be such a required nutshot he would only need to punch the air in a downward direction to hit you from across the room. XD
Then he'd probably go change into something that covers him up for the next few days. :(
It would be such a required nutshot he would only need to punch the air in a downward direction to hit you from across the room. XD
Then he'd probably go change into something that covers him up for the next few days. :(
I'm glad you liked the little story. I've always been tempted to add those little blurbs into all the pictures I put up since they tease the viewer as much as the picture does. I did feel awfully naughty writing it though. XD
I'm sure you could find your way past his jaws sooner or later. If someone hangs around him long enough expressing interest he might finally take them up on their offers. He might even let them put their mouth around his length to get some extra enjoyment out of it first. But after that he overpowers and swallows them down every time. That tight belly loses all evidence of its definition for a few days while his date is gurgling away. After that it's back to the weight lifting and crunches to burn off the new layer of fat, and thus creating more attention to begin enticing his next living meal. :3
I'm sure you could find your way past his jaws sooner or later. If someone hangs around him long enough expressing interest he might finally take them up on their offers. He might even let them put their mouth around his length to get some extra enjoyment out of it first. But after that he overpowers and swallows them down every time. That tight belly loses all evidence of its definition for a few days while his date is gurgling away. After that it's back to the weight lifting and crunches to burn off the new layer of fat, and thus creating more attention to begin enticing his next living meal. :3
I think it adds so many interesting elements! There's an immediate implication of the reality of what's going on, and of how the predator's body wants food inside of it right now. It also opens up all sorts of stupid chances to use the term 'I want you inside me' and its variants which I find amusing. XD
It gets the prey to react in various ways, whether to make them nervous or to actually be a turn on, and it may make the predator act differently too!
It gets the prey to react in various ways, whether to make them nervous or to actually be a turn on, and it may make the predator act differently too!
He's probably a little too muscular, but I don't really know what I'm doing when I color things so I left it like that. I can always say that it's simply the result of all the working out to burn off the fat from the (un)lucky few who actually get a taste of him before ending up trapped under those abs and contributing to his physique whether they want to or not. He's a trap! XD
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