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>>> GDOCS LINK TO THE STORY! >>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/.....kagBWHgP_/edit
Repost, with a (slightly edited) picture. because screw FA shrinking story icons. Have a picture that'll hopefully grab your attention.
1) This story contains body inflation, embarrassment, shame, teasing, humiliation (of a relatively tame variety, I like to think), There's also mention of diapers/pampers, but it's fairly light.
2) This was a trade. Until I hear otherwise, they're anonymous.
3) The coverart used was a commission I got from
aquajack. They do good stuff. https://www.furaffinity.net/view/44026106/ Here's the original. EDIT: Guess they removed themselves.
4) This used to be labeled mature, but now that FA allows you to keep minors out, fuggit, it's back to general. I didn't write this story with sexual intent, I made it cozy on purpose. Thanks for coming.
5) The title only really works if you pronounce Vi as "Vee" instead of "V-eye". It's supposed to be "V-eye", like "Violet", but I read it as Vi my first playthrough of Bug Fables and I refuse to stop. The pun is "Three Cheers". "Vi cheers". Get it? EDIT: Vindication, the lead writer of the game said it's pronounced like the french word (So Vee-oh-let).
I made this as a trade to kind of get myself motivated and inspired to make stories. It kinda worked. Still feeling severely demotivated, but at least I made something I'm proud of. I hate the fact that Bug Fables is almost 3 years old. Like Undertale, it still feels fresh to me. Unlike Undertale, it didn't blow up into a huge internet phenomenon. Which sucks because it's such, such a great game. With bugs. Really lovely bugs. The story is full and rich with character, if not epic plot. And you get excellent exploration on top of that. Aces~
Anyway, I love the 3 main heroes to bits, but Vi is my favorite. She's an anti-rogue in the best way. She wants money, but she doesn't steal for it. She demands pay for her work, but definitely doesn't overcharge. She just... wants what's owed to her. I like that.
Anyway, here's a story where her friend, Leif, who likes poking her inflated ego, inflates her. Why? Because he thought it would be funny and cute. Maybe he has a fetish for this thing?
I tried to keep it friendly and lovely, despite the "forced" nature of it. While I like "forcing" characters to do these kinds of things, nothing gets my fetish-feelings tingling like a character that does it to themselves, in some fashion. Losing a bet one was too cocky over would do that.
Anyway, please leave a review, they give my soul life, meaning, and the pursuit of happiness.
Repost, with a (slightly edited) picture. because screw FA shrinking story icons. Have a picture that'll hopefully grab your attention.
1) This story contains body inflation, embarrassment, shame, teasing, humiliation (of a relatively tame variety, I like to think), There's also mention of diapers/pampers, but it's fairly light.
2) This was a trade. Until I hear otherwise, they're anonymous.
3) The coverart used was a commission I got from
aquajack. They do good stuff. https://www.furaffinity.net/view/44026106/ Here's the original. EDIT: Guess they removed themselves.4) This used to be labeled mature, but now that FA allows you to keep minors out, fuggit, it's back to general. I didn't write this story with sexual intent, I made it cozy on purpose. Thanks for coming.
5) The title only really works if you pronounce Vi as "Vee" instead of "V-eye". It's supposed to be "V-eye", like "Violet", but I read it as Vi my first playthrough of Bug Fables and I refuse to stop. The pun is "Three Cheers". "Vi cheers". Get it? EDIT: Vindication, the lead writer of the game said it's pronounced like the french word (So Vee-oh-let).
I made this as a trade to kind of get myself motivated and inspired to make stories. It kinda worked. Still feeling severely demotivated, but at least I made something I'm proud of. I hate the fact that Bug Fables is almost 3 years old. Like Undertale, it still feels fresh to me. Unlike Undertale, it didn't blow up into a huge internet phenomenon. Which sucks because it's such, such a great game. With bugs. Really lovely bugs. The story is full and rich with character, if not epic plot. And you get excellent exploration on top of that. Aces~
Anyway, I love the 3 main heroes to bits, but Vi is my favorite. She's an anti-rogue in the best way. She wants money, but she doesn't steal for it. She demands pay for her work, but definitely doesn't overcharge. She just... wants what's owed to her. I like that.
Anyway, here's a story where her friend, Leif, who likes poking her inflated ego, inflates her. Why? Because he thought it would be funny and cute. Maybe he has a fetish for this thing?
I tried to keep it friendly and lovely, despite the "forced" nature of it. While I like "forcing" characters to do these kinds of things, nothing gets my fetish-feelings tingling like a character that does it to themselves, in some fashion. Losing a bet one was too cocky over would do that.
Anyway, please leave a review, they give my soul life, meaning, and the pursuit of happiness.
Category Story / Inflation
Species Bee
Size 120 x 90px
File Size 131.9 kB
I still think this is a lovely story.~ I absolutely love the descriptions of how Vi feels both from her perspective and just tactile wise both when she's taut from the ice and sloshy from all the water, and her cutesy cheers are just adorable. You did a wonderful job on their characterization as well. Vi and Leif both feel like they do in the game with their banter even while discussing silly, poofy thoughts. I really adore Vi's character in particular, with how she's reluctantly going along with the plan, but is still very much going along with it and throwing her all into it when pushed because she wants to do something nice for her friend (even if it's because of a lost bet, fair is fair). It's a wonderful mix of cute, sweet, teasing, and puffy.~
This is the first time I've been complimented on my technical choices, thank you!
Yes, I find it's much easier on the eyes to not have the paragraphs physically (digitally?) close together. Spacing them with actual space makes it so much easier to read. And hey, white text on black worked for Undertale, so of course it works for me. It's SO much easier on the eyes.
Nailing personalities is my specialty, it seems. If you're gonna write about the bugs in bug fables, if you're going to love them like that, then... it's important to get them right. Vi and Leif are my favorite characters, though all of Snakemouth are a perfect little found family together. Vi and Leif's ribbing and teasing of each other brings out the best in each other, their best, and silliest, qualities. But they also still care about each other and I did my best to show that off, too.
I'm glad the various details about the sloshes and crinkles were times right. A weird compliment, but one I thoroughly appreciate. Pacing that stuff out so it's not overbearing is tricky, so it's appreciated someone noticed. And yes, I'm glad that ending was amusing. Not usually the way I like to end things, but it felt right, here.
If you feel like discussing more of my work, or your work, let me know, please! Your review gave me so, so much life. Pampers and balloons (or fatties) is a rare treat. I wish very, very much I could read and write more myself. If that's a thing you're into, you have a friend here who's up for it~
Yes, I find it's much easier on the eyes to not have the paragraphs physically (digitally?) close together. Spacing them with actual space makes it so much easier to read. And hey, white text on black worked for Undertale, so of course it works for me. It's SO much easier on the eyes.
Nailing personalities is my specialty, it seems. If you're gonna write about the bugs in bug fables, if you're going to love them like that, then... it's important to get them right. Vi and Leif are my favorite characters, though all of Snakemouth are a perfect little found family together. Vi and Leif's ribbing and teasing of each other brings out the best in each other, their best, and silliest, qualities. But they also still care about each other and I did my best to show that off, too.
I'm glad the various details about the sloshes and crinkles were times right. A weird compliment, but one I thoroughly appreciate. Pacing that stuff out so it's not overbearing is tricky, so it's appreciated someone noticed. And yes, I'm glad that ending was amusing. Not usually the way I like to end things, but it felt right, here.
If you feel like discussing more of my work, or your work, let me know, please! Your review gave me so, so much life. Pampers and balloons (or fatties) is a rare treat. I wish very, very much I could read and write more myself. If that's a thing you're into, you have a friend here who's up for it~
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