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Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
Species Wolf
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They are resist to mostly many many kinds of things~ as saying goes "You cannot beat a river into submission" xD
so wyverness sexy thigh attack wouldn't work~
thus wyverness must submit to the river! Ahaha!!
I'm both reading the magazine and browsing FurAffinity. xD
so wyverness sexy thigh attack wouldn't work~
thus wyverness must submit to the river! Ahaha!!
I'm both reading the magazine and browsing FurAffinity. xD
Delightful!
My favourite panel is the last one. I truly love that landscape with a full raging thunderstorm.
It’s impressive how quickly the weather change in a single day, totally not correlated to that ominous and grieve looking tower. Yes, a totally normal weather change with no dread feeling or foreshadowing at all.
I admit it, I was totally not expecting a lonely tower. I wasn’t expecting anything at all because I wasn’t focusing much. Then I thought: could have been a cave or grotto, or even a castle in ruin or in perfect shape. I like the tower even for the symbolism it can represent: I can’t say I know Nova, but if she like to be alone, then it’s a perfect manifestation of that. She can fly off from the roof by gentle gliding with no effort. Elevated prospective of field helps to spot intruders or something like that. Or maybe she just like the view.
It’s a little bit like a classical wizard tower: grumpy scholars that cares for their research and secrecy, not wanting to be disturbed or interrupted.
I can imagine her alone in the tower, grumpy and maybe a bit bored. Then I remember your other short comic with her. How she was smiling in the bed, faking sleep and listening to you, maybe engulfed by happiness for your appreciation.
But as I said before: I don’t know Nova, nor the story. That could even be a mage tower and Nova be like a pris-- a special guest. (I don’t think she could be a prisoner of anybody, not even if she were playing or faking it)
I like to think that it could be anything and that we can only know by going forward.
To conclude: I like the flower shape of Magma, it’s brilliant.
I find the swinging part a bit confusing. I imagine like the hiding failed, wolf jumped to attack but it’s a miss, only to land on the branch which bend and toss away Magma. Or something.
Also, nice job on the landing hit. Desing is good and funny. The fall damage reductions is legit: excellent work with the UI effects.
And for now: “Forward, to the unknown!”
(The determination in her eye, in the las pannel. Soo good!)
My favourite panel is the last one. I truly love that landscape with a full raging thunderstorm.
It’s impressive how quickly the weather change in a single day, totally not correlated to that ominous and grieve looking tower. Yes, a totally normal weather change with no dread feeling or foreshadowing at all.
I admit it, I was totally not expecting a lonely tower. I wasn’t expecting anything at all because I wasn’t focusing much. Then I thought: could have been a cave or grotto, or even a castle in ruin or in perfect shape. I like the tower even for the symbolism it can represent: I can’t say I know Nova, but if she like to be alone, then it’s a perfect manifestation of that. She can fly off from the roof by gentle gliding with no effort. Elevated prospective of field helps to spot intruders or something like that. Or maybe she just like the view.
It’s a little bit like a classical wizard tower: grumpy scholars that cares for their research and secrecy, not wanting to be disturbed or interrupted.
I can imagine her alone in the tower, grumpy and maybe a bit bored. Then I remember your other short comic with her. How she was smiling in the bed, faking sleep and listening to you, maybe engulfed by happiness for your appreciation.
But as I said before: I don’t know Nova, nor the story. That could even be a mage tower and Nova be like a pris-- a special guest. (I don’t think she could be a prisoner of anybody, not even if she were playing or faking it)
I like to think that it could be anything and that we can only know by going forward.
To conclude: I like the flower shape of Magma, it’s brilliant.
I find the swinging part a bit confusing. I imagine like the hiding failed, wolf jumped to attack but it’s a miss, only to land on the branch which bend and toss away Magma. Or something.
Also, nice job on the landing hit. Desing is good and funny. The fall damage reductions is legit: excellent work with the UI effects.
And for now: “Forward, to the unknown!”
(The determination in her eye, in the las pannel. Soo good!)
Its Bivis! 💖
aye, it's a full day travel, so the day turn darker in different penal, with additional scary looking lightning on the tower.
I guess most dragon has their preferred way to be isolated. I myself will prefer a cave in a forest, with at least a river and some glowing crystal light in it.
but well, if you are hoarding a pile of gold, you'll mostly need to live a life of being lonely and a bit of bored. i guess
But no worries, Nova isn't a protagonist character, but does useful to help expending my stories a bit.
And my bad for the swinging part, she was supposed to be sort of 'propelling' herself forward, or do a huge leap of faith jump.
but i guess i wasn't really clear about it when i draw it.
while you are looking forward to my arts, I'm also looking forward to your sweet comments. thanks Bivis! ✨🌸
aye, it's a full day travel, so the day turn darker in different penal, with additional scary looking lightning on the tower.
I guess most dragon has their preferred way to be isolated. I myself will prefer a cave in a forest, with at least a river and some glowing crystal light in it.
but well, if you are hoarding a pile of gold, you'll mostly need to live a life of being lonely and a bit of bored. i guess
But no worries, Nova isn't a protagonist character, but does useful to help expending my stories a bit.
And my bad for the swinging part, she was supposed to be sort of 'propelling' herself forward, or do a huge leap of faith jump.
but i guess i wasn't really clear about it when i draw it.
while you are looking forward to my arts, I'm also looking forward to your sweet comments. thanks Bivis! ✨🌸
I'm glad I'm able to give positive feedback. But in the end I'm only making comments of what I see or feel.
As for the swinging Magma, yes, it's a hard piece. If it wasn't for the word "swing!" presence, I would have thought another thing: like a bride collaps or even a trap.
However, I think the core concept here was the jurney. Perils, obstacols and risks to surpass. And that, in a way or the other, works perfectly fine. Because that's what I got in the end: a jurney. Better still: an adventure. Even if it was a day of walking... more or less... hum... *Stares at the jelly fluid body which has no legs*
As for the swinging Magma, yes, it's a hard piece. If it wasn't for the word "swing!" presence, I would have thought another thing: like a bride collaps or even a trap.
However, I think the core concept here was the jurney. Perils, obstacols and risks to surpass. And that, in a way or the other, works perfectly fine. Because that's what I got in the end: a jurney. Better still: an adventure. Even if it was a day of walking... more or less... hum... *Stares at the jelly fluid body which has no legs*
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