YES!!! Jane going back home after making such an impact in Moe's life! And the complaint being dismissed? Well, now I have to wonder what the story there is... Excellent new chapter, Madneko!

Maybe Mary will adopt Maria and Jane will have a big sister.

I had a feeling about that happening when Maria was first introduced!

Yeah in a way it is Moe's fault that Jane was away for so long. I really fell in Love with Moe and wanted to do her arc justice.

Awww, I'm sure she'll get a chance to be a Mommy again, to another special little one!

Oh god, poor Moe!

There's a really good texture to your writing, it makes me a little jealous tbh. I feel like my attempts at writing are lifeless and dull, yours has what mine lacks. There's a few small grammar mistakes here and there, but your writing has a lot of creativity and life to it. I really enjoy reading your work, thanks for sharing it =)

Oh my gosh thanks. I'm really glad that you enjoy my work :) I put a lot of work into Moe so she felt real and then that grew into me being able to really flush out her story.

Also not to spoil things but we will see Moe again. Just under better circumstances.

It is such a wonderful chapter and so good to see Jane back with her mother. I hear stories about transgender who have families who do not accept that they are female deep down. It's so good to see Jane being nurtured to discover her feminine self. I can imagine her second childhood to be a happy one, where SHE will grow up a happy lady.

Yeah I knew that I wanted Jane to have a a struggle with her identity. Yet I didn't want it to be with other people. I think the benefit of this was that it really let me focus on just her feelings and anxiety.

QuQ This is such a bittersweet chapter. I'm actually glad for everyone Mary, Jane and Moe. Moe did really glow up with Jane at her side and I'm willing to bet that she won't relapse too much after Jane's prolonged visit. Though it is of course sad that she had do let her go after accepting herself as Jane's guardian D:
Which, on the other side of the coin: Huge relief that Jane is finally on her way home again \o/ She deserves being showered in love by her family for the next few days, as it will inevitably happen!

I really liked the changing perspective, from Moe to Mary and back, the timing was perfect! With Moe wishing for bad luck and then the scene where it seems like Mary might actually get into more trouble. It's great!

Thanks so much. I put a lot of work in the changing perspective wanting to make sure it still flowed. I'm really really proud of the arc that I wrote for Moe and feel like I did her justice.

Aight it took me way too long to get to this but ah! Such a good way to end off this arc. What’s going to happen with Moe from here on feels very blurry but has a lot of hope, which is just excellent. The breaks into Mary’s perspective were done quite well and really helped balance the mood throughout. I think this was just a super special and happy chapter. Also nice little cliffhanger for what’s going on with Maria right now.

I always like to try and give criticism when I’m commenting but I find it hard with this story. So sorry, only praise today <3

Hey I'm glad that you enjoyed reading it. I'm also glad I got to finally finish this arc on a mostly happy note.

Is this the end of the story?

No. It will continue. I have ideas for at least one more chapter of my favorite kitten. Unless there is an outcry for it though Jane may take a bit of a backseat in my writing schedule.

Im happy Jane is going back with Mary

Yeah. This arc definitely had some sour moments but I'm so happy that she is back with her mom. Also wow you really blew through all those chapters fast. I'm going to take that as a compliment.

I had a few days off, and I got really interested in this story and wanted to know what happened next

Hope this not the last though hope be back again really enjoy these

I'm super happy to hear that and always honored that this story is good enough that someone can read through all the chapters one after another. Jane will definitely be back. I'm just taking a short break, while I plan out the next arc. Also still a bunch more to write with Maria's journey.

I am sorta rereading them a bit now. Your stories are just really good enjoying these and when you break free stories

I love the detail of Maria haveing something on her mind while talking to Mary about jane it adds a extra layer to this story so cleanly and well this is a fantastic story so far good job.

Thanks. I really think that my writing has grown a lot since I started. I'm always really happy when people let me know that they enjoyed my writing so thank you for the comment.

Shit I've been keeping tabs on this for like five years on what's left of FTT. 5 years and only 4 parts behind not to bad. can't believe I've been following this for like 7 years +.

Haha, Yeah the tale of Jane the cat might be only months, but it has been told over years. I'm glad that my story has been good enough that you have continued to check on it.