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Commentary:
Oh hey Rikku's here too! This one another reason I never cut to the bakery in this chapter. I didn't want to let the reader in on who all was at the bakery by the time Luna got there to keep the backup a surprise. Initially I was going ot have Lubo be the one to respond to Rikku's appearance in panel 3, but I decided to have Tygo have a say on this situation too. Plus Lubo is probably distracted by this friend of Lopu that he's never met before. Tygo is still not great with names, so he addresses him as "Katana Dude", as that is the only person he's met so far that has a katana.

I didn't think to even give names for powers until Volker showed up to name drop "Alpha Form" in chapter 16. I then had to explain why certain power user characters never once uttered those words. My solution was to have certain societies have names for them if they take powers much more seriously. Volker, Dracmore, Usaro, and Margrethe come from the same place that has a combat Colosseum, so they know the names for powers. I decided that wherever Elek came from would take powers seriously as well to introduce it to other characters.

Batuu: Oh great... not that guy too =w=;