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Tye is the school outcast. Alone and cut off from the rest of society, he enjoys the pleasures of being left alone. Kylo is the new kid in the school. Silent, awkward, and in desperate need of interaction. No two people could be any more different, yet, they both have dark pasts which will bring them closer together than they could possibly imagine. Together they must work to put the pieces together of their pasts to find the answers they've waited their whole lives to find.
Today Tye tells Kylo everything about his life. All of the secrets will be reveled and Tye's life will become unravelled at the truth is told.
Chapter 1
Today Tye tells Kylo everything about his life. All of the secrets will be reveled and Tye's life will become unravelled at the truth is told.
Chapter 1
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 100px
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Wow, this chapter is amazing, I actually cried a fair bit.
You've really made an incredible story, there's so much to Tye, so much sadness about it, and there's him looking after Miles. This is really great.
It's really sad, Miles, he wasn't even meant to be born, and his father left afterwards, and Tye cares for him so much and gives up a lot for him. I cried when Tye gave him the dessert. I never thought Tye did that for Miles. And Miles is such a happy cub, really innocent, which most people can say that their younger years didn't involve all the hate and such they do now. Tye though, growing up would have been really hard, seeing his mother, a really nice lady change like that would destroy anyone, and he keeps going for his brother, it's really beautiful. When/if Miles finds out he was made by his father raping his mother will be horrible. Really horrible.
It's sweet though, that Kylo is there to help, to be a friend, because Tye needed a friend like Kylo. The story he promised Miles, that's really sweet, too.
Really loved this chapter.
Ah, I wanted to say too, that I've noticed a few times authors using artists in their writing, and, it's good authors who do this too. You really are an artist, Wolfbaine. Your work really shows how well you can get your message across, and how creative you are. You have so much talent.
You've really made an incredible story, there's so much to Tye, so much sadness about it, and there's him looking after Miles. This is really great.
It's really sad, Miles, he wasn't even meant to be born, and his father left afterwards, and Tye cares for him so much and gives up a lot for him. I cried when Tye gave him the dessert. I never thought Tye did that for Miles. And Miles is such a happy cub, really innocent, which most people can say that their younger years didn't involve all the hate and such they do now. Tye though, growing up would have been really hard, seeing his mother, a really nice lady change like that would destroy anyone, and he keeps going for his brother, it's really beautiful. When/if Miles finds out he was made by his father raping his mother will be horrible. Really horrible.
It's sweet though, that Kylo is there to help, to be a friend, because Tye needed a friend like Kylo. The story he promised Miles, that's really sweet, too.
Really loved this chapter.
Ah, I wanted to say too, that I've noticed a few times authors using artists in their writing, and, it's good authors who do this too. You really are an artist, Wolfbaine. Your work really shows how well you can get your message across, and how creative you are. You have so much talent.
awes... thanks Mully *hugs* You always leave the best comments. I think this was my favorite chapter to write. Miles is quite an important part of the story and even though his birth wasn't planned, overall it was for the better because it made Tye have something to care for. I don't think I'm going to let Miles know he was the result of a raping because yes, Miles is a very innocent cub.
And thanks for the compliment Mully. I know I still have a LONG ways to go before I can be professional, but it helps dearly to know there are people who believe I have the talent to do so. I try to get messages across to people. To teach lessons and to know somebody is recieveing them is what keeps me going. :)
And thanks for the compliment Mully. I know I still have a LONG ways to go before I can be professional, but it helps dearly to know there are people who believe I have the talent to do so. I try to get messages across to people. To teach lessons and to know somebody is recieveing them is what keeps me going. :)
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