DUDE, really awesome job yet again.
You know, after each chapter you bring out I get all these different ideas in my head of what's going on that you haven't told yet, and what happens next, like, I always love it when I see your stuff in my submissions. The way this chapter ended was interesting, sorta like when Tye would push out the thought that he and Kylo were friends, ahah,, can't wait to see what develops from that.

Also,, I dunno, I just love the way you write. Like, you give a good description of everything to make the set the scene and show how people feel, how they act and such, but you don't go into too much detail that'd make it boring. You haven't drabbled on, which a fair few published have done and lost my interest.

And I've noticed sometimes that artists/writers/musicians/everythingelse include themes relating to the arts in their work. So, I wanna ask, when you write, is it like how Kylo writes? (Or the other way around, ahah) Because where he was explaining how he had a story in his mind and the words just came out seemed like a part of yourself that you've put in. Though, have you got like, files on your computer, or pages in a notebook or something, of planning, or notes and that? Because it really shows that you've put in heaps of effort, and not just letting your hand write away.

Yeah, favourited.

Unless you did let your hand write away, of course

haha. Thanks again for your input Mulley. Actually, I do write as Kylo described. I don't really plan that much beyond a simple idea of what I want in a chapter. Like, in this one I knew I wanted a way that Tye could find money. As I was writing though, my mind just expanded it into involving Lance, then Kylo becoming solemn, and Tye being confused with his friendship. I've never really planned everything out into detail. Sure, I've got things planned for later chapters, but they're just ideas. The whole story comes as I'm writing it.

Wow, mate, that's really awesome you know. You're just a natural at writing, for sure.
Already excited for the next chapter, haha.
That's crazy how you can just write and come out with a story like this. I know I probably say it a lot, but keep it up ^^