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Tye is the school outcast. Alone and cut off from the rest of society, he enjoys the pleasures of being left alone. Kylo is the new kid in the school. Silent, awkward, and in desperate need of interaction. No two people could be any more different, yet, they both have dark pasts which will bring them closer together than they could possibly imagine. Together they must work to put the pieces together of their pasts to find the answers they've waited their whole lives to find.
It's the last day of school and Tye is both happy for the end, yet disappointed to stop being with Kylo. His spirits are raised when he agrees to be with Kylo during the summer. However, he finds that not only will be with this friend, he will also be needing to discover the truth of Kylo. Tye is growing suspicious of Kylo's life and it's only a matter of time before the secrets spill.
It's the last day of school and Tye is both happy for the end, yet disappointed to stop being with Kylo. His spirits are raised when he agrees to be with Kylo during the summer. However, he finds that not only will be with this friend, he will also be needing to discover the truth of Kylo. Tye is growing suspicious of Kylo's life and it's only a matter of time before the secrets spill.
Category Story / All
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Loved this one, you've set the last day before summer scene really well, like, that slack kind of atmosphere after all the exams, and then the energy coming from everyone once the day's finally over. I think the part where everyone was counting down while Tye and Kylo were talking was really well written.
There are still heaps of things popping up in my head of what I think's going to happen, with when Tye finds out about Kylo's home life, and just what'll happen with the two of them. All the little sort of things too,, like in this chapter with Anthony,, and a fair few chapters ago with Brad the otter, which seemed sort of random in there maybe... I dunno, maybe I just payed more attention because he's an otter.
Riley as well!! Wanna see what goes on with him later on.
And the last bit with the hug was cute, ahah
There are still heaps of things popping up in my head of what I think's going to happen, with when Tye finds out about Kylo's home life, and just what'll happen with the two of them. All the little sort of things too,, like in this chapter with Anthony,, and a fair few chapters ago with Brad the otter, which seemed sort of random in there maybe... I dunno, maybe I just payed more attention because he's an otter.
Riley as well!! Wanna see what goes on with him later on.
And the last bit with the hug was cute, ahah
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