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<<< PREV | FIRST | NEXT >>>The epic story of Streak and the Vigils of Beacon City begins with a humble origin story. Empowered by his symbiotic companion, a young wolf named Chad Vale embarks on his first night as a superhero, with no idea of what awaits him.So it begins!
These new stories are a whole lot longer than the originals. They're more complex, with better character work and overall writing. This first volume consists almost entirely of completely new stories, instead of the extensive rewrites you'll see in volume 2 and 3. For those of you who've read the originals before the rewrites, you may think you know what's going to happen, and some of you might be right, so I ask that you refrain from mentioning any spoilers in the comments.
I'm open to feedback and constructive criticism. If you see any typos or weird sentences, please let me know, especially over on Discord!
I want to give a huge thanks to everyone who's helped me reach this point, and especially all my friends on Discord who've been proofreading each chapter thus far!
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wow, this was an *incredible* start to the new era of Streak! now where should i begin?
firstly, this length was epic! made the whole thing feel a lot more meaty than your earlier work, but it was still plenty engaging!
i really appreciate the extra insight into Chad's life and character it allowed you to give too :) and as always, Faith and Chad are an adorable couple :3
enjoyed picking up on some bits from the original Beacon City stories i recognised, haha
did notice a little bit where the italics didn't quite kick in (Well, thought the wolf, [/i]she doesn’t need to know about something like “digestive expulsion independence” just yet. I need to take this slow.[/i]) because FA is a perfect website with zero flaws lol
"Trouble, but it's Streak's kind of trouble" GODDDDD Chad is such a dork <333
though a violent gang war isn't an ideal situation to end up in on your first night as a superhero, huh? xD
i am a fan of grit though, so the violence is appreciated :)
really nice to see Steelbadger show up "early" here! he's effortlessly cool as always... seems like all that medical knowledge is quite useful in a fight :0
simply amazing work here! so glad Streak's back and better than ever~
i'm trying to write a furry superhero story myself, and it's fair to say you're a huge inspiration haha
hoping this'll give me the boost i need to finally start putting it out there this year :)
firstly, this length was epic! made the whole thing feel a lot more meaty than your earlier work, but it was still plenty engaging!
i really appreciate the extra insight into Chad's life and character it allowed you to give too :) and as always, Faith and Chad are an adorable couple :3
enjoyed picking up on some bits from the original Beacon City stories i recognised, haha
did notice a little bit where the italics didn't quite kick in (Well, thought the wolf, [/i]she doesn’t need to know about something like “digestive expulsion independence” just yet. I need to take this slow.[/i]) because FA is a perfect website with zero flaws lol
"Trouble, but it's Streak's kind of trouble" GODDDDD Chad is such a dork <333
though a violent gang war isn't an ideal situation to end up in on your first night as a superhero, huh? xD
i am a fan of grit though, so the violence is appreciated :)
really nice to see Steelbadger show up "early" here! he's effortlessly cool as always... seems like all that medical knowledge is quite useful in a fight :0
simply amazing work here! so glad Streak's back and better than ever~
i'm trying to write a furry superhero story myself, and it's fair to say you're a huge inspiration haha
hoping this'll give me the boost i need to finally start putting it out there this year :)
Thank you so much! And thanks for pointing out the issue with the italics! This was a great little review, and I can't wait for you to see the rest of the volume! I fear the length might put some people off, but it was necessary to do what I wanted with each chapter. The whole volume is basically a huge novel!
you're welcome! i was worried this comment was too long but i just wanted to get all my thoughts down lol
that sounds great! it'll be like a three-book series by the end :)
i'm the kind of guy who can get really stuck into a book or a piece of writing, so the length is no issue for me
especially when the writing is this good :)
keep it up! you've got me hooked~
that sounds great! it'll be like a three-book series by the end :)
i'm the kind of guy who can get really stuck into a book or a piece of writing, so the length is no issue for me
especially when the writing is this good :)
keep it up! you've got me hooked~
And so it begins, once more unto the breach of superheroics for Chad! Where will he go, what will he see, what might he do...?
Though he is speedrunning a lot of things in the superhero life, even as it sets him up for disaster. Poor Chad, so read up on the superhero life yet he ignores some of the most damning problems in his eagerness. That totally won't come back to haunt him later/soon. And nice to learn more of his interests besides superheroics and his relationship with Faith. Plus the lore bits are just as interesting to me as they are to him, heh.
And of course, the first fight. Chilling, amazing, and puts into perspective just how outclassed he is so far. While also introducing him to a future recurring tormentor and a new very vicious villain that is hopefully equally recurring.
Though he is speedrunning a lot of things in the superhero life, even as it sets him up for disaster. Poor Chad, so read up on the superhero life yet he ignores some of the most damning problems in his eagerness. That totally won't come back to haunt him later/soon. And nice to learn more of his interests besides superheroics and his relationship with Faith. Plus the lore bits are just as interesting to me as they are to him, heh.
And of course, the first fight. Chilling, amazing, and puts into perspective just how outclassed he is so far. While also introducing him to a future recurring tormentor and a new very vicious villain that is hopefully equally recurring.
omg i just finished reading origin of streak and i am literally obsessed because that part where chad claps all alone in the lecture hall was so painfully relatable i actually felt for him then seeing him and faith at the gym was such a vibe because their energy together feels so real i am a webcomic artist and the whole time i was reading i could totally see the belltower transformation scene happening in comic panels with the blue light and his fur changing colors your story is honestly so good but i feel like it is missing a few specific visual hooks that would make the da crowd go crazy for it so i would love to share some cool ideas i have to help it stand out if you are down to chat about it
Finally sitting down to read. Already can feel the complexity of the world, giving the superheroes a past and place in history was a great choice. Satisfied with Steel Badger's belly scene ha ha.
Great work.
Perhaps my only comment would be about the fictional countries. Not necessarily a bad thing but it feels to me that you're going a long way round just not to say the country accent. In the original version it was more direct and concise. But I don't know if this ties with your worldbuilding expansion.
Hugs <3
Great work.
Perhaps my only comment would be about the fictional countries. Not necessarily a bad thing but it feels to me that you're going a long way round just not to say the country accent. In the original version it was more direct and concise. But I don't know if this ties with your worldbuilding expansion.
Hugs <3
Thanks for the thoughts! Yeah, I may have overdone the accent descriptions a bit. The reason is because I wasn't confident enough that the readers would infer which real-world country these fictional countries represent. Maybe I'll fix it sometime, but will take it into account with the proceeding volumes.
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