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Wow! Finally its here!
So this is my first work including my own fursona, Kylithi. Please let me know of any criticism you have. I like both good and bad (though plz be nice and not say something like 'oh it stinks').
Hopefully the adventure bit will pull you in and keep you captivated till I get the next bit typed up, which is nearly finished now.
Enjoy!
Next : http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6576387/
So this is my first work including my own fursona, Kylithi. Please let me know of any criticism you have. I like both good and bad (though plz be nice and not say something like 'oh it stinks').
Hopefully the adventure bit will pull you in and keep you captivated till I get the next bit typed up, which is nearly finished now.
Enjoy!
Next : http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6576387/
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 4.8 kB
The only thing i can see so far is that putting a bit more depth in the setting and establishing the characters a bit more would be lovely~
I wouldn't know what creature Kylithi was unless i guessed from your icon or looked at your profile *other then feline when it was said she'd land on her feet but other then that, no specifics.) :3 Putting a little focus on establishing those details can help people imagine your characters properly in the setting and get a feel for them outside their personality :3
Very interesting so far~ I'm reading the next ones and such~ ^_^
I wouldn't know what creature Kylithi was unless i guessed from your icon or looked at your profile *other then feline when it was said she'd land on her feet but other then that, no specifics.) :3 Putting a little focus on establishing those details can help people imagine your characters properly in the setting and get a feel for them outside their personality :3
Very interesting so far~ I'm reading the next ones and such~ ^_^
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