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Pretty much sums up how i felt about life in around *trys to think* grade 9 kinda area =/ it would be longer but i actually wrote it in school, so ya know. ejoy i guess xD
Category Poetry / All
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Size 109 x 120px
File Size 275 B
I like the idea here of the ongoing metaphor; i think it has a lot of potential, but it feels like it finished too soon. Its a great concept, especially if you made it circular to the first line. I think this is a good show of originality :D I'd like to see what you can do with it!
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