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A twist on the orignial Pokemon Mystery Dungeon Red/Blue Rescue. instead of letting his partner Electra endanger herself Cubone also known as Marrow desides it is for the best if he embarks on his long journey to find the truth about him on his own. Many dangers await him outside both the outside world and his own home. Will Marrow find the truth or will Gengar finally susceed in killing our hero?
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Pokemon
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 15.2 kB
This story has potential, but I would recommend NOT sticking to the game's actual dialogue. It's… wonky to say the least. Put a little of your own pizazz in it! Jazz it up! Write as your own writing style!
You should also make sure the pacing isn't rushed or anything; that's a big problem among most amatuer stories.
Continue it! I'm interested in seeing how it goes :)
You should also make sure the pacing isn't rushed or anything; that's a big problem among most amatuer stories.
Continue it! I'm interested in seeing how it goes :)
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