Actually this isn't that bad. It's just that the picture looks sort of "grainy" with the lines. I'm not sure what you use for an art program, but if you could clean up the lines it would look a lot better. Also, I'm not sure if the feet are pointing the right way from the perspective we're looking at. Other than that you ARE improving just keep trying.

Hope this helps a little!

I was using a 'tutorial' I found on DA, although it was alot harder then it looked. And my scanner SUCKS and it adds this noise to the image so thats why it looks all 'grainy'.