This actually isn't that bad at all. I like it. Sounds like a super bastardized version of like... the Castle music in Super Mario Bros. Or something. It really reminds me of that for some reason.

Hehe. I gotta say. Don't put yourself down too fast. The screaming sounds in this make me think of fireworks. The melody along with the drums have a good enough variety, that the tune doesn't get stale quick. I've never worked with FL studio, so I don't know the options... but, if I were at the helm, I'd change the baseline instrument into something deeper and smoother. It feels a bit too staccato/stiffled to me. Overall, I think it shows promise. Keep working on it!

(I'm slightly disturbed to see both avatars on this page are stretching panties..) >.>
*cough* Carry on. =)

Wow, thank you very much! ^_^
As fur the bass, I like that idea. The instrument I used was actually part of the trance template I started with so I didn't even think to go back and change it. Much appreciated! :3 *continues to stretch panties*

<stretches panties moar> 8U

***suddenly panics and escapes to safety!

I like this.. It reminds me some old retro game from the past :D

Keep up the good work

Much thanks! I'm really glad you like it!
Hopefully theres more to come :D

I like the fireworks!

Fireworks make me happy!

Yes omg I love that sound too X3

Sounds very hip-hop. Sounds like something from Doom or something. I like it. Gives an creepy like atmosphere.