A sci-fi story of James, a young vagabond who thought it would be easy money to work his way across the galaxy on an old freighter.
A shortcut through an unmapped system doesn't go to plan and James and the lion-like alien Crit find themselves fighting for their lives on an inhospitable alien planet.
And Crit's species are consummate carnivores.
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A shortcut through an unmapped system doesn't go to plan and James and the lion-like alien Crit find themselves fighting for their lives on an inhospitable alien planet.
And Crit's species are consummate carnivores.
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Category Story / All
Species Lion
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my mind mentally compared the ship to the Millennium Falcon. lol.
I would perceive based on the sizes though, that this ship is many,many times larger.
I don't know that I'll like the other chapters,but this is very well written
my mind tries to predict, non of the 3-4 "reasonable" predictions are too great, then again that's based on previous experience. I'm sure you'll surprise me
I would perceive based on the sizes though, that this ship is many,many times larger.
I don't know that I'll like the other chapters,but this is very well written
my mind tries to predict, non of the 3-4 "reasonable" predictions are too great, then again that's based on previous experience. I'm sure you'll surprise me
Thanks for the compliment!
Perhaps the Sirius is what the Millennium Falcon might be like if it transported ore rather than contraband... Just much, much, larger.
I'll try to live up to your expectations. You never know, I might surprise you. And I promise Crit the lion will be showing up before too long!
Feel free to add any critiques, I'm always looking to improve.
I typically post Wednesday and Sunday.
Perhaps the Sirius is what the Millennium Falcon might be like if it transported ore rather than contraband... Just much, much, larger.
I'll try to live up to your expectations. You never know, I might surprise you. And I promise Crit the lion will be showing up before too long!
Feel free to add any critiques, I'm always looking to improve.
I typically post Wednesday and Sunday.
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