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Forgotten Past
16 years ago
So the story line has been an ongoing work in form or another for some time now. Recently I got the idea to start over, scrapping well over 90 percent of what I had. What you see in the first submission is what I am happy with so far. I have been working on it regularly with no case of writer's block in sight...WOOT!
Any who, the second installment will be a bit bigger,and have a bit more going on it. I hope to include a lot more in it as I go along, but right now I am sitting on several pages of scraps that need to be written in all directions to fit right. I would eventually like to add pics of the characters and possibly action sequences to go along with the tale...any takers?
For now things seem to working out pretty good for this story. I look to carrying it on for quite some time. To tide over any interested readers, here is an excerpt from part 2:
A few moments later Alex got the desired effect. The remaining soldiers curled up and covered their heads, unable to see anything that was about to happen. Alex reached up to the headset and turned off the mini-cam, cutting off Laura’s visual feed of what was happening. He usually did this before things were going to get messy. She knew that what came next would be brutal. She quickly transferred over to the satellite feed, viewing the ordeal from above. In a flash of movement, Alex hit the top of the still burning APC causing it to rock violently. He was still just long enough for the heavy machine guns in the windows to take note of his presence. The brief pause in fire told him that they were either reloading, or they had seen him. As the barrels turned on him, he guessed the latter. With blinding speed, he went from the APC to the ground, to the top of the security wall, ending with a suicide leap through the gunfire. The Lycan disappeared into the window, taking parts of the window frame and the gun crew with him.
Any who, the second installment will be a bit bigger,and have a bit more going on it. I hope to include a lot more in it as I go along, but right now I am sitting on several pages of scraps that need to be written in all directions to fit right. I would eventually like to add pics of the characters and possibly action sequences to go along with the tale...any takers?
For now things seem to working out pretty good for this story. I look to carrying it on for quite some time. To tide over any interested readers, here is an excerpt from part 2:
A few moments later Alex got the desired effect. The remaining soldiers curled up and covered their heads, unable to see anything that was about to happen. Alex reached up to the headset and turned off the mini-cam, cutting off Laura’s visual feed of what was happening. He usually did this before things were going to get messy. She knew that what came next would be brutal. She quickly transferred over to the satellite feed, viewing the ordeal from above. In a flash of movement, Alex hit the top of the still burning APC causing it to rock violently. He was still just long enough for the heavy machine guns in the windows to take note of his presence. The brief pause in fire told him that they were either reloading, or they had seen him. As the barrels turned on him, he guessed the latter. With blinding speed, he went from the APC to the ground, to the top of the security wall, ending with a suicide leap through the gunfire. The Lycan disappeared into the window, taking parts of the window frame and the gun crew with him.
