All I could ask for is more endo and more CV stuff. That and more mischief from Tulip or that greedy mare with a hunger bigger than her capacity.

I was about to say 90% of what i write is endo, then I remembered everything else and... yeah.

The only issue I have with buttercup is that I kinda have to be in a mood for horse bellies... that and the thanksgiving story is kinda hard to top in my opinion, at least while keeping her on the farm. it's a similar situation with Tulip, that dog park series was kind of peak for her greed so it's kinda hard to figure out where to go next.

which reminds me, what did you think of the easter story, it was my first time genuinely going for a holiday story instead of writing something that just happened to fit the holiday theme.

either way glad you always enjoy my stories.

Well, one scenario for Tulip is that she gets EXACTLY what she wants from Will with a bit of accidental vore. All his cum. Tulip being her nosy and persistent self could end up taking a dive down Will's cock, since its prone to some pretty decent growth and such. And thus he has to deal with horny wolfess taking up residence in there. And thus write out how he would deal with that. And Claire's likely amusement at yet another predicament her boyfriend got into.

For Buttercup, there are a few things you can do. One you need to let us know if Coal ever got out, or if she is stuck with the stallion stud in there. She also could have learned her lesson after the third story, or maybe not. From what is depicted of her in your stories, she kinda seems like her eyes are bigger than her capacity, and she might try to get everyone again, and make an effort to actually drag her massive middle along. *shrugs* Anyways. Musings about the mare's character like that aside. Other things could be her nabbing Claire's folks again, and Claire has to come rescue them from the gluttonous mare. There is plenty to do if you actually stop and think about different things that could happen. Another possibility is when Buttercup is getting plugged by Coal, he ends up with Juniper going into his cock, instead of his cock in her.

Basically things to try for ye that you only did once or twice: Breast Vore, CV, the consequences of being filled with cum after UB and things like that. As for the Easter Story, wasnt my thing so one of the few I skipped. The whole egg laying thing. Just aint my interest.

CV is fun, but it's also a little much for me to do near-same-size CV. unless we're talking snakes, but even then i'd have a limit. Maybe it's just how I like to write, but i'm only a fan of big stuff if there's a lot of littler things going into it, or there's a progression from small things to one MASSIVE thing. you know one step at a time. but that's certainly an idea to mull over for a while so who knows, maybe I'll get to it one day.
(small addendum: maybe it's a little hypocritical because I do same size unbirth, but I just can't really get into same size CV without some buildup. It's just has to do with the fact I tend to visualize my stories as i write them, and unfortunately 9/10 times that level of CV right off the bat throws my visualizations out of whack and it just devolves from there. for example: Ub is more believeable because you have the whole torso to act as a kind of support, and you have strong but flexible abs to allow for easy consumption, where as dicks don't have the kind of infrastructure to make it easy. it's just hard for me to visualize same-size cv in a way that wouldn't seem like it the dick was on the verge of splitting open like a banana,{pardon the cursed image} without something to balance it off of first.)

all of those are some really great ideas, and honestly I would, but I'm still in a main cast mood and I plan on working that out before anything else, though I might end up doing the followup one of these days, probably the next time I'm in the mood to write horses.

BV is kinda it's own thing in my head, P.P&P was a test run to see how i visualize it, and it really only works so long as there's a veritable cornucopia of vorny to temper it, and it falls in a similar vein to CV, same size prey off the bat without leadup or support just doesn't work in my head. so sadly, CV and BV are going to be few and far between stories for me. Ironically, I'm working on my third Cum-After-UB entry right now. As for the easter story, there's no egg laying that's directly mentioned, just implied to happen after the story cuts out. but hey, can't win 'em all.

and I know i've said this a bunch already but I really am glad to know you liked most of the stories i've written.

Well, Tulip isnt quite the same size as Will, so there is that. Same for Juniper and one of the stallions. But as you said main cast focus for now. So moving on from her. As I said, Tulip isnt quite the same size as will, or bigger. Bit smaller aint she? And considering just how big Will gets down there in some cases, I THINK she would fit. If barely. Not like Im suggesting he shoves CLAIRE in there after all~ As while that WOULD be funny, I know thatd be a bit much for your taste. As for the breast vore bit. I wasnt imagining them stuffing each other in there right away. More of finding out its possible with a finger, for example, when tweaking/pinching themselves, or a roving tongue from Will on Claire.

Another thing you could do, involving mainline characters is do a part two of the fusion story, where Claire accidentally merges everyone, and Tulip is the sorta main mind of the new creation. And thus her reaction to the new blended being after she gets fucked by them.

I hate how when I go from line to line in my response I lose the plot of what I'm trying to say SO fast... SO I'll just say this, you have great points, and I'm not trying to knock your ideas, but alot of the stuff I've done once or twice is just situational, or mood based stuff. CV is in a weird spot, and I have an admittedly massive bias towards unbirth as a whole. BV is it's own thing.

That fusion aftermath idea sounds like something I would do eventually. Ultimately, I just want to say thanks for the feedback and sticking with me through my nonsense lmao

Personally I think your writing is good and are a nice length.

Belly size is a interesting issue, too big and you push the suspension of disbelief to much, but not big enough creates other issues. There is a point where it gets too big but nobody will agree on what that size is until it gets to big for their own liking. A rather strange phenomenon ngl


I did enjoy the scenarios(<--whats the correct term for this?) where the character becomes pregnant with what they unbirth on accident.

Could also be used as a plot point to introduce a character that is much smaller then you envision at first but have them grow larger via growing in the one that accidentally becomes pregnant with them.

I do also quite enjoy birth denial stuff but that is so niche I doubt you have even seen any nor it be your kind of thing if you have.

Glad to know my stories rarely approach the TLDR word count, and I'm certainly glad you think my writing isn't dogshit lmao

Belly size is definitely hard to write around, and I found myself only vaguely hinting at how big the bellies get so it's a little easier to avoid going too far... most of the time lol

scenario is the correct term, and the accidental unbirth-preg bit was honestly one of the biggest ideas I'm proud of imagining, I know i'm probably not the first to do so, but still.

That would be an interesting plot point, but in the main story i'd have to be VERY careful with it, mostly because doing it too much could mean flying too close to the incest sun (it's an iffy thing for me, sometimes its okay({ish} but most of the time i'll pass on the incest stuff [take a look at the farm stories involving Claire's parents and that's about the closest I'd deliberately go when it comes to that stuff]) It's already pretty tough juggling every character already in the series, adding another main character would be too much on my plate (for now)

and finally, I've never actually heard of birth denial, but from what it sounds like, that's also pretty close to a can of worms I'd rather leave unopened, but hey you do you.

okay after a cursory lookup, I was imagining something completely different from birth denial, So maybe I might end up writing it at some point, or at least a version that's deliberate and not involuntary. (voluntary on the mom's part at least, as that is something akin to forced endo which is it's own thing that i do also find kinda hot from time to time.)

You may not be the first to write accidental unbirth-preg but it's rare enough that you might as well be the only(still living) writer of it.

Didn't even think of the incest thing... That is a pretty good reason to be careful with it.


Huh... It is rather close to forced endo now that I think about it, at least when its voluntary on the mom's part. Never really thought about it that way...
I wonder if there is more birth denial content but got tagged as endo because they also didn't know the term was a thing. Will have to look sometime.

Might I ask what you were imagining it to be? Just curious, no need to answer if you don't want to.

FYI deleting my responses because i apparently wasn't as okay with explaining the image my brain conjured as i thought i was, sorry

That bad huh? Probably better I not think of what it could be either then.

no no, the image itself isn't that bad, it's just the explanation makes it sound a hundred times worse than it is. and when it comes to stuff like that, any risk of being misunderstood turns me into a nervous wreck. I'm fairly certain i said this at one point but I'm a bundle of nerves who hates being misunderstood.

OKay here we go again, (i'm gonna try explaining it in a way that gets the idea across without sounding horrible)

Birth denial, (at least the image my brain first conjured of it) had some heavy incest undertones that I didn't like.

okay yeah that one settles into my head a hell of alot better than the original.

As someone who has written many a comment that resulted in angry people because I wrote it kinda weird, I understand. Though, I more get angry in myself for messing up the explanation then anxious.

Ah I guess I can see how that could seem like that based only on the words used.
Sorry about causing any nervousness for trying to get the explanation right.

nah it's not really your fault I got nervous, you asked a question and I was the one to get bent out of shape. nice to know I'm not the only one that goes through comment jitters though lol