You're doing it wrong! :)
16 years ago
How can one chapter have 15 views, and then the next one have 32?
My shit is already confusing enough, but if you miss something, it's going to leave you going "WTF is this guy smoking?" :)
My shit is already confusing enough, but if you miss something, it's going to leave you going "WTF is this guy smoking?" :)
FA+

*tosses more rabbits and big salmon to*
Hopefully I'm not the only one! Your stories have been fun to read, and I always try to make time to read the next chapter whenever it shows up. It honestly brightens up my day when I log into FA and find another installment to read. :D
/fanboy
I just wish I could actually format some paragraphs! This FA interface is so damn hostile to text format stuff.
OpenOffice.Org has a really easy 1-click doc-to-pdf conversion feature, and it's freeeeeeee. ^___^
And I do think your writing has improved a lot! Not a bad thing, but it means that if you ever want to rewrite the thing it'll be a lot of work. XD
I want to put a little more description in there, and flesh out some of the scenes more. Perhaps even alter, or drop other scenes entirely.
And you might consider compiling it into a book format w/ PDF while you're at it. XD
And second, I absolutely LOVE your new icon. Dancing eagles for the win!