Art critique?
14 years ago
I've got other things I need to respond to on here, but I wanted to toss this journal up. I know sometimes I'm leery of critiquing someone's work unless it's clear that they want it.
So just in case it wasn't clear already...HI, I'D LOVE SUGGESTIONS ON HOW TO IMPROVE. Two heads (or three or five or a hundred) are definitely better than one, and I'd rather take advice from people more talented than myself than to get in a rut drawing the same shit and mistakes over and over.
So just in case it wasn't clear already...HI, I'D LOVE SUGGESTIONS ON HOW TO IMPROVE. Two heads (or three or five or a hundred) are definitely better than one, and I'd rather take advice from people more talented than myself than to get in a rut drawing the same shit and mistakes over and over.
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If all you can draw is wolves/dogs, you are shooting yourself in the head. Of course you will be stuck in ruts. You need to venture outside of what you like for new material that you can infuse into what you like to do to keep it fresh.
You should ask yourself what is it about your work you don't like, what are the areas you want to improve in. Is it you want a better use of color, better anatomy, more technical environments, or even more simplified characters? The list goes on and on and it's very hard for someone to give a useful critique that fits the artists desires. Find out what you want to improve and go do it. By doing it, you'll improve. There's really no secret to it, just keep learning and practicing.
Do I get to pick E, all of the above? >>;; But that's a pretty logical way of looking at it. Probably anatomy and technique most, but I wouldn't object to improving in other areas. I guess I'll keep that in mind and just try and keep it open for people to point out if something looks off to them.
This is pretty helpful advice, thanks again.
Hope I'm not overstepping boundaries because I'm not really ... better than you at art, but one thing that has always thrown be off about your work is the lower part of the muzzle and the way you draw teeth. You seem to draw teeth too big for the mouth, and sometimes it looks like your characters have underbite because of the placement of the lower jaw?? So maybe look at some diagrams for canine teeth and muzzle placement?
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/5677037/ is a good example of what I'm talking about.
Pfth, I like your art. And I think I see what you mean. I'll start looking at more refs for that, probably overdue for that.