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18 years ago
All right! I've finally posted something! And about damn time, too, eh?
I haven't shown this stuff to many people yet, and the one person I did never got back to me with a critique, so it's been reviewed, refined, and rewritten to a point where I feel comfortable showing it to all of you.
The first three chapters are up now, and chapter 4 is about halfway done. I also have a full chapter and a half of the end, so I know where it's going. It's just a matter of figuring out how many go in between.
Read. Enjoy. Criticize. Just give me some feedback. [EMAIL]russarulo@yahoo.com[/EMAIL]
I haven't shown this stuff to many people yet, and the one person I did never got back to me with a critique, so it's been reviewed, refined, and rewritten to a point where I feel comfortable showing it to all of you.
The first three chapters are up now, and chapter 4 is about halfway done. I also have a full chapter and a half of the end, so I know where it's going. It's just a matter of figuring out how many go in between.
Read. Enjoy. Criticize. Just give me some feedback. [EMAIL]russarulo@yahoo.com[/EMAIL]
