Mary sue meme thing
14 years ago
Borrowed from Kompy and someone elses journal :p Delicious copypasta!
Man, do I even really wanna know?... why not?
Doing two - one for my 'sona, one for my webcomic character Taioken
Name: Webkilla (using character traits from my webcomic)
Pic: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2333437/
[ ] They are possessed by an angel
[ ] They are possessed by a demon
[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[x] They are physically strong
[ ] They have a rare hair/fur colour (Lamnian foxes love silver...the silverer the better...)
[ ] Their eyes are an unusual colour
[ ] This happens to be red
[ ] Their eyes change colour
[ ] They have wings (the pic was more of an experiment, wings aren't a regular feature)
[x] They can grow extra body parts/shape shift (Shapeshiftin' is her specialty!)
[x] They are immortal
[ ] (if a female) they have large bra size
[x] (if a male) they are very muscular
[x] They are very attractive to the opposite gender
[x] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[x] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[x] They are a healer
[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[ ] They have lost one/both of their parents
[ ] They ran away from home
[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death
[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[ ] They never knew their parents
[x] They were abused/spoiled as a child (not sure, but by modern standards I'd say yes)
[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender
[ ] They have lots of friends/no friends (well thats a bit of a 'you cant say no' deal)
[ ] They are emo/cutesy
[x] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[x] They are currently in a relationship (how does that sue)
[ ] They have lots if morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem
[ ] They have a mental disorder
[ ] They have an emotional disorder
[ ] They struggle to stay sane (Who doesn't?)
[ ] They are a psycho (Define this!)
[ ] They have multiple personalities
[x] They are very intelligent
[ ] They have hallucinations
[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[ ] They have a guardian spirit
[x] They have a 'special type' of soul
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them (Huh?)
[x] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[x] Some part of their body glows (only they use 'dem powers)
[ ] They have a rare/unusual name
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth
[ ] They are connected with a certain element
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared (In some countries it's not a good idea to flaunt one's witchy-ass shapeshifting abilities.)
[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives (how 'bout in the forest?)
[ ] They are hiding from someone/something
[ ] They have a rare blood type
[ ] They cry blood (Jeezus!)
[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live (lives on a different planet, but in a sci-fi setting thats normal...)
[ ] They are very mysterious/dark
[ ] They are very lively/happy
[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[ ] They are very patient
[ ] They are from a long line of (insert profession/power here)
[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[ ] They have amnesia
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[ ] The have a curse upon them (Was that already asked?)
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'
[ ] They have insomnia
Overall points: 15
Point Reductions
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[ ] They smoke
[ ] They are an alcoholic
[ ] They are overweight
[ ] They are addicted to drugs
[] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[x] They do not care much about others
[ ] They are emotionless
Final Score is: 12
Whew!
<5 -Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^
6-15 -Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.
16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.
26< -Mary-Sue
yay not mary sue!
NOW TAIOKEN
Name: Taioken (from my webcomic)
Pic: http://psitech.comicgenesis.com/Tai.....encharpage.htm
[ ] They are possessed by an angel
[ ] They are possessed by a demon
[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[x] They are physically strong (when he hulks out)
[ ] They have a rare hair/fur colour (Lamnian foxes love silver...the silverer the better...)
[ ] Their eyes are an unusual colour
[ ] This happens to be red
[ ] Their eyes change colour
[ ] They have wings (the pic was more of an experiment, wings aren't a regular feature)
[x] They can grow extra body parts/shape shift (Shapeshiftin' is her specialty!)
[x] They are immortal
[ ] (if a female) they have large bra size
[x] (if a male) they are very muscular (...when hulking out)
[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender
[x] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[x] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[x] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers (The fex)
[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[x] They are a healer
[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[x] They have lost one/both of their parents (mommy ran off, killed daddy)
[x] They ran away from home
[x] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc. (why he killed daddy)
[x] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death (when he did dad)
[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[ ] They never knew their parents
[x] They were abused/spoiled as a child (drunk dad raped him once)
[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender
[ ] They have lots of friends/no friends
[ ] They are emo/cutesy
[x] They look much younger/older than they really are. (immortality/not aging...)
[ ] They are currently in a relationship (how does that sue?)
[ ] They have lots if morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem
[ ] They have a mental disorder
[x] They have an emotional disorder
[ ] They struggle to stay sane (Who doesn't?)
[ ] They are a psycho (Define this!)
[ ] They have multiple personalities
[x] They are very intelligent
[ ] They have hallucinations
[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[ ] They have a guardian spirit
[x] They have a 'special type' of soul
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them (Huh?)
[x] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[x] Some part of their body glows (only they use 'dem powers)
[ ] They have a rare/unusual name
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth
[ ] They are connected with a certain element
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared (In some countries it's not a good idea to flaunt one's witchy-ass shapeshifting abilities.)
[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[ ] They are hiding from someone/something
[ ] They have a rare blood type
[ ] They cry blood (Jeezus!)
[x] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown (tell him you love him)
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live (lives on a different planet, but in a sci-fi setting thats normal...)
[x] They are very mysterious/dark
[ ] They are very lively/happy
[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[x] They are very patient
[ ] They are from a long line of (insert profession/power here)
[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[ ] They have amnesia
[x] They have some sort of permanent medical condition (ptsd from daddy rapings)
[ ] The have a curse upon them (Was that already asked?)
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'
[ ] They have insomnia
Overall points: 23
Point Reductions
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[ ] They smoke
[ ] They are an alcoholic
[ ] They are overweight
[ ] They are addicted to drugs
[x] They have a short temper
[x] They enjoy bullying others
[x] They do not care much about others
[ ] They are emotionless
Final Score is: 20
Sue... :(
but a mean sort of sue I guess. fucker doesn't even try to pass himself off as nice or lovable.
oh well
Man, do I even really wanna know?... why not?
Doing two - one for my 'sona, one for my webcomic character Taioken
Name: Webkilla (using character traits from my webcomic)
Pic: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2333437/
[ ] They are possessed by an angel
[ ] They are possessed by a demon
[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[x] They are physically strong
[ ] They have a rare hair/fur colour (Lamnian foxes love silver...the silverer the better...)
[ ] Their eyes are an unusual colour
[ ] This happens to be red
[ ] Their eyes change colour
[ ] They have wings (the pic was more of an experiment, wings aren't a regular feature)
[x] They can grow extra body parts/shape shift (Shapeshiftin' is her specialty!)
[x] They are immortal
[ ] (if a female) they have large bra size
[x] (if a male) they are very muscular
[x] They are very attractive to the opposite gender
[x] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[x] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[x] They are a healer
[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[ ] They have lost one/both of their parents
[ ] They ran away from home
[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death
[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[ ] They never knew their parents
[x] They were abused/spoiled as a child (not sure, but by modern standards I'd say yes)
[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender
[ ] They have lots of friends/no friends (well thats a bit of a 'you cant say no' deal)
[ ] They are emo/cutesy
[x] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[x] They are currently in a relationship (how does that sue)
[ ] They have lots if morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem
[ ] They have a mental disorder
[ ] They have an emotional disorder
[ ] They struggle to stay sane (Who doesn't?)
[ ] They are a psycho (Define this!)
[ ] They have multiple personalities
[x] They are very intelligent
[ ] They have hallucinations
[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[ ] They have a guardian spirit
[x] They have a 'special type' of soul
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them (Huh?)
[x] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[x] Some part of their body glows (only they use 'dem powers)
[ ] They have a rare/unusual name
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth
[ ] They are connected with a certain element
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared (In some countries it's not a good idea to flaunt one's witchy-ass shapeshifting abilities.)
[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives (how 'bout in the forest?)
[ ] They are hiding from someone/something
[ ] They have a rare blood type
[ ] They cry blood (Jeezus!)
[ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live (lives on a different planet, but in a sci-fi setting thats normal...)
[ ] They are very mysterious/dark
[ ] They are very lively/happy
[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[ ] They are very patient
[ ] They are from a long line of (insert profession/power here)
[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[ ] They have amnesia
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[ ] The have a curse upon them (Was that already asked?)
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'
[ ] They have insomnia
Overall points: 15
Point Reductions
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[ ] They smoke
[ ] They are an alcoholic
[ ] They are overweight
[ ] They are addicted to drugs
[] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[x] They do not care much about others
[ ] They are emotionless
Final Score is: 12
Whew!
<5 -Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^
6-15 -Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.
16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.
26< -Mary-Sue
yay not mary sue!
NOW TAIOKEN
Name: Taioken (from my webcomic)
Pic: http://psitech.comicgenesis.com/Tai.....encharpage.htm
[ ] They are possessed by an angel
[ ] They are possessed by a demon
[ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[x] They are physically strong (when he hulks out)
[ ] They have a rare hair/fur colour (Lamnian foxes love silver...the silverer the better...)
[ ] Their eyes are an unusual colour
[ ] This happens to be red
[ ] Their eyes change colour
[ ] They have wings (the pic was more of an experiment, wings aren't a regular feature)
[x] They can grow extra body parts/shape shift (Shapeshiftin' is her specialty!)
[x] They are immortal
[ ] (if a female) they have large bra size
[x] (if a male) they are very muscular (...when hulking out)
[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender
[x] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[x] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[x] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers (The fex)
[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[x] They are a healer
[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[x] They have lost one/both of their parents (mommy ran off, killed daddy)
[x] They ran away from home
[x] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc. (why he killed daddy)
[x] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death (when he did dad)
[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[ ] They never knew their parents
[x] They were abused/spoiled as a child (drunk dad raped him once)
[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender
[ ] They have lots of friends/no friends
[ ] They are emo/cutesy
[x] They look much younger/older than they really are. (immortality/not aging...)
[ ] They are currently in a relationship (how does that sue?)
[ ] They have lots if morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem
[ ] They have a mental disorder
[x] They have an emotional disorder
[ ] They struggle to stay sane (Who doesn't?)
[ ] They are a psycho (Define this!)
[ ] They have multiple personalities
[x] They are very intelligent
[ ] They have hallucinations
[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[ ] They have a guardian spirit
[x] They have a 'special type' of soul
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them (Huh?)
[x] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[x] Some part of their body glows (only they use 'dem powers)
[ ] They have a rare/unusual name
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth
[ ] They are connected with a certain element
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared (In some countries it's not a good idea to flaunt one's witchy-ass shapeshifting abilities.)
[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[ ] They are hiding from someone/something
[ ] They have a rare blood type
[ ] They cry blood (Jeezus!)
[x] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown (tell him you love him)
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live (lives on a different planet, but in a sci-fi setting thats normal...)
[x] They are very mysterious/dark
[ ] They are very lively/happy
[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[x] They are very patient
[ ] They are from a long line of (insert profession/power here)
[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
[ ] They have amnesia
[x] They have some sort of permanent medical condition (ptsd from daddy rapings)
[ ] The have a curse upon them (Was that already asked?)
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'
[ ] They have insomnia
Overall points: 23
Point Reductions
Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:
[ ] They smoke
[ ] They are an alcoholic
[ ] They are overweight
[ ] They are addicted to drugs
[x] They have a short temper
[x] They enjoy bullying others
[x] They do not care much about others
[ ] They are emotionless
Final Score is: 20
Sue... :(
but a mean sort of sue I guess. fucker doesn't even try to pass himself off as nice or lovable.
oh well