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The Reboot has Begun
13 years ago
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I've restarted, as you can likely see. I have started using 'I.' I have also moved away from a slightly more awkward starting position, so I don't have to spend thousands of words in each branch discussing the awkwardness.
Most notably, the main character has four initial physical personas. Two male, two female, with race, height and weight being featured. As a result, I've had to wince as I uploaded four identical story segments. Otherwise, the options would be unreadably dense and hard to follow. It's a necessary evil that I hope will not be repeated.
Edit: When I have enough submissions, I will be moving the original CYOA to scraps.
Most notably, the main character has four initial physical personas. Two male, two female, with race, height and weight being featured. As a result, I've had to wince as I uploaded four identical story segments. Otherwise, the options would be unreadably dense and hard to follow. It's a necessary evil that I hope will not be repeated.
Edit: When I have enough submissions, I will be moving the original CYOA to scraps.
I'm also hoping for a positive-feedback loop caused by, well, positive feedback. I'm getting subscribers, favourites, and views in rapid order because I'm updating a lot. This encourages me, wanting me to write more. The cycle starts again. I'm definitely not a popularity monger, but I do appreciate that people want to read my work. Makes me think I'm doing something right.