I've been thinking about posting a story I have up on another site here to try and get more people involved and see if I can get comments and such on how to make it better as well as ideas that I could possibly use for future chapters. At the moment I just finished writting chapter 14 but only have chapters 1 through 9 posted on the other site. I do have them saved on a thumbdrive so it won't be hard to post it here but I still have to type up the other 5 chapters. For those that would like to read it you can send me a personal note or comment on my page and I'll send you a note with the link to the site and where the story first starts. If you do read it id appriciate comments on my page or something that tell me either how good or bad it was. All comments are welcomed because they'll only help me get better. Id also like to see in the comments if I should post it on here or not. I thank those that read this and thank those that read my story and do as Id like even more. Hoping to get enough comments by the time I type up chapter 14 so there's plenty of time as far as I know to read this, read the story, and comment.