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14 years ago
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um hello everybody i wrote a mlp fanfiction story its my first time writing one so it might not be that good yet but i will get better so read it and tell me what you think in this journal or private mesage because i need all the feedback i can get so if your a brony and love to read fanfiction then you will enjoy this http://www.fimfiction.net/story/335.....Choice-of-Love
GabrielLaVedier
~gabriellavedier
Well, i'm a pony author over there. Let me take a look at it and give you my take.
Mr.Meyhem
~mr.meyhem
OP
alirght thanks ^^
GabrielLaVedier
~gabriellavedier
Left some (hopefully) helpful commentary.
Mr.Meyhem
~mr.meyhem
OP
thanks but im now confused and scared cause when it finally gets approved what if it doesn;t take off
GabrielLaVedier
~gabriellavedier
Well, that happens. I've written things that just got no attention at all. These things tend to happen.
Mr.Meyhem
~mr.meyhem
OP
yeah your right im goona proofread my work and put it up on a diffrent site casue that site takes to long to approve stuff but thanks for all your help and hey i will keep you in mind for when i write my next story ^_^
GabrielLaVedier
~gabriellavedier
No trouble at all. It's my pleasure to help aspiring writers.
Mr.Meyhem
~mr.meyhem
OP
yup now its time to rewirte adn make it better
