Honestly I wouldn't mind seeing brief 'dates' between Tia and Genevieve. I mean you covered their relationship in your story however, I wouldn't mind seeing a more detailed scene of the two well having a stay home dinner date. Though this is just a idea.

Ahhh, though I wasn't speaking of just them. Coming up with new characters is no hassle. Still, I'll keep that in mind!

Ahh, interesting! It isn't often you come across an author ready, willing, and able to take on such requests! Rather refreshing find, you are! That being said, I've always been rather fascinated with the concept of force-feeding or stuffing. How about a story wherein a character slowly, but surely, develops an addiction to good food. This character eventually comes to desire the rush she'd come to feel when pushing herself to consume a little more beyond her limits each time she tried, which then might lead to her actually requesting another party to force-feed her into food-induced comas, or stupors, or what-have-you.

Or, barring that, how about a tale of comeuppance? Wherein a character gets her jollies from tormenting her fat classmates or co-workers, only to eventually find herself in a situation wherein she grows to be even fatter than her victims, almost without even realizing it.

I can think of more, but just off the top of my head, those are two ideas I'd really like to see. I do hope you'll consider them. I'll be watching your page, just in case. I've seen some of your other work. You've got talent, my friend! Especially that piece on Genevieve and Tia. I hope you'll keep it up!

Ahh, interesting! It isn't often you come across an author ready, willing, and able to take on such requests! Rather refreshing find, you are! That being said, I've always been rather fascinated with the concept of force-feeding or stuffing. How about a story wherein a character slowly, but surely, develops an addiction to good food. This character eventually comes to desire the rush she'd come to feel when pushing herself to consume a little more beyond her limits each time she tried, which then might lead to her actually requesting another party to force-feed her into food-induced comas, or stupors, or what-have-you.

Or, barring that, how about a tale of comeuppance? Wherein a character gets her jollies from tormenting her fat classmates or co-workers, only to eventually find herself in a situation wherein she grows to be even fatter than her victims, almost without even realizing it.

I can think of more, but just off the top of my head, those are two ideas I'd really like to see. I do hope you'll consider them. I'll be watching your page, just in case. I've seen some of your other work. You've got talent, my friend! Especially that piece on Genevieve and Tia. I hope you'll keep it up!

Umm....yeah, just FYI, that double-post shouldn't have happened.... my bad

Hmm, it's nice to see someone with some legitimate interest in the concept! I'm quite busy at the moment, hence my neglect of my page, but I might just get on some of those!

Ah, you're still there! I feared you gone for good! lol But as an amateur author myself, I believe and appreciate that character, setting, and plot development are all key factors in good story-telling, and fetish fiction is no exception. Getting to know characters and certain facets of their personal lives, as well as accurate descriptions of their physical appearances, makes it easier to imagine them for the reader. I'm not one who reads just anything. If I'm not interested by the third paragraph, I move on. Which is why I'm so looking forward to your next piece :) No rush though. Real world issues take precedence. Handle yours, mate.