I'm finally back on track with writing it chapter two, and I'm working through the concept phase of my second story. After predator's second chapter is released, I'll be posting a journal talking about my next story, and taking suggestions on how you would like this story to contrast Predator. After the raffle I got a lot of feedback, and some made mention that they enjoyed my writing style, but the story themes weren't really for them. My next story will be intended to contrast predator and give an idea to how broad my written work can be.

Back to Chapter Two: Chapter Two is right now in a phase of development that is still early enough to adjust. If any of you reading this have suggestions on how you would like the story to evolve, this is a great time to give your thoughts! You can either comment to this journal, or send me a note! I'm writing this story for both myself 'and' FA, so I'm more than happy to adjust it along the way to make it as fun to read as it is to write!

Also, on my page you can keep track of my progress with each of my works. As I finish one of my five phases of development (Concept, First Paragraph, Rough Draft, Polishing, Completed.) I'll update my user page.
And why is the first paragraph it's own phase? I don't know about other writers, but the opening paragraph is incredibly important to me, and is the hardest phase of the story to complete. The polishing phase is time consuming sure, but not as hard as the first f-ishing paragraph..

Enjoy!