I don't know much about the Electronic genre but I'll give it my best shot.

Everything seems to flow together nicely except for the very beginning. Those fading High-Hat sounds (I think that's what they are) seem to be out of place in the starting handle bar.

My DJ experience doesn't dip to far in the Electronic sounds so, as to what to replace it with/how to edit it, I can't help you there.

I'll check it out after work bro