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Snowblind may return for a HUGE rewrite!
11 years ago
After the longest time, I've been thinking about ol' Snowblind. It was a good story. It really was; lots of characters, designs, and action. Violent action, insane action, sometimes elegant action. And the story was quite good, too. But it did have it problems, and there was a good few. Character development was lacking, some things were inconsistent, the story seemed a little fucked up at times, and book 3 was a right hot mess, especially at the end. But then, it had its really good parts. The end scenes of some of the parts were stellar (End of book 1 literally.), and the action was just amazing. And the length just made it great, eh? But it does require some love, seeing as it was my longest story, got me the most watches and new fans, and even got several pieces of wonderful art. Trevor deserves better than the sudden ending I gave him out of fatigue with the series.
So, Snowblind'll be getting a re-write in the future. Books one and two will be getting heavy edits in general- more character development, more description, less random events, things removed that didn't make much sense (And this includes some cameos. Sorry.), and Trevor's surname will actually be mentioned more than a few times in part two. His surname is Locke, by the way.
Book three, on the other end, is going to get a much bigger change. I'll keep the first handful of pages- mostly what that introduced characters- and then the rest will be totally re-written. Yes, totally. For the third fucking time. (Some of you readers may remember the failed first start.) But it'll be worth it. Since I ended the series of Snowblind, I got better with characters, story, and a lot more besides. Maybe, just maybe, I can apply this into Snowblind.
Now, I want to know what you guys want to see in the massive edit. What you think should be changed, edited, added, ect. This edit process will be partially fueled by you guys. Now, I wont be getting to this for awhile; after all, I do want to try to finish something before I start this project. But I do want you guys to know one thing-
Trevor. Will. Be. BACK.
So, Snowblind'll be getting a re-write in the future. Books one and two will be getting heavy edits in general- more character development, more description, less random events, things removed that didn't make much sense (And this includes some cameos. Sorry.), and Trevor's surname will actually be mentioned more than a few times in part two. His surname is Locke, by the way.
Book three, on the other end, is going to get a much bigger change. I'll keep the first handful of pages- mostly what that introduced characters- and then the rest will be totally re-written. Yes, totally. For the third fucking time. (Some of you readers may remember the failed first start.) But it'll be worth it. Since I ended the series of Snowblind, I got better with characters, story, and a lot more besides. Maybe, just maybe, I can apply this into Snowblind.
Now, I want to know what you guys want to see in the massive edit. What you think should be changed, edited, added, ect. This edit process will be partially fueled by you guys. Now, I wont be getting to this for awhile; after all, I do want to try to finish something before I start this project. But I do want you guys to know one thing-
Trevor. Will. Be. BACK.
zildjainzone
~zildjainzone
YAY!
fireandfeathers
~fireandfeathers
OP
I knew you'd like the news. I won't really be changing Jake much in the story, but if you want anything different, just throw me a note. He's a good character, and fit well. Glad to see you're still around, haha.
zildjainzone
~zildjainzone
Hey, Yeah Im just in the market and awaiting new commissions but hardly any replys from many... How very kind of you my friend to keep Jake in business. Il drop a note if any idea comes up!
fireandfeathers
~fireandfeathers
OP
Sounds fine to me. It'll be awhile before I start- got one story to finish- and then it'll be awhile before I reach Jake's appearance, so you've got time.
