Jaspian: The Return! (and I need your help!)
10 years ago
Good evening fluffs.
I've been threatening this for some time as my alter-ego
Etheras... I am planning to revive Jaspian as an active character. Why?
For the same reason as I created Etheras. There were whims that I wanted to pursue that I felt did not fit with the persona that I had established for Jaspian, and therefore I had to choose between corrupting the character I had painstakingly cultivated... or create a second one and start anew. Obviously, I decided on the second path.
Etheras was created to explore a bit more of my dark side. A sinister dominant femboy overlord with a taste for conquest (and equines). However, much like a bit of my dark side started creeping into Jaspian, I feel like Etheras is becoming too much like Jaspian was. A lot of the time, he's now shown being... what I would consider... tame. And "out of character".
And so, now I need an outlet for those tamer whims too. And thus: I plan to start using this profile again, and generating new artwork.
BUT THERE'S A CATCH. There are several reasons why I stopped getting Jaspian artwork for a time. Jaspian is... quite frankly... boring compared to Etheras. I admit it. Etheras is a huge improvement stylistically and in how well-defined his personality is.
Here's where I need YOUR HELP. When I reboot Jaspian, I want him to change him to be more unique and interesting, yet things that artists can do easily. (For example, artists frequently got Jaspian's eye markings wrong, because they weren't well-defined. Same goes for the pattern of his fur. And thus, you got wildly different eye markings and fur patterns / colors.)
So I'd really like to hear your suggestions. Do you have any ideas on styles for Jaspian? For defining his personality some? What are some other characters that Jaspian reminds you of when you look at him? Have you ever wished-for / imagined a fennec with a particular attribute (serious entries, please!) Or in-general: ideas for improving this character? Please leave comments down below. Really good ideas that you think folks might swipe, put those in the notes.
And I can't wait to hear your brilliant ideas. Thanks!
~ Jaspian
I've been threatening this for some time as my alter-ego

For the same reason as I created Etheras. There were whims that I wanted to pursue that I felt did not fit with the persona that I had established for Jaspian, and therefore I had to choose between corrupting the character I had painstakingly cultivated... or create a second one and start anew. Obviously, I decided on the second path.
Etheras was created to explore a bit more of my dark side. A sinister dominant femboy overlord with a taste for conquest (and equines). However, much like a bit of my dark side started creeping into Jaspian, I feel like Etheras is becoming too much like Jaspian was. A lot of the time, he's now shown being... what I would consider... tame. And "out of character".
And so, now I need an outlet for those tamer whims too. And thus: I plan to start using this profile again, and generating new artwork.
BUT THERE'S A CATCH. There are several reasons why I stopped getting Jaspian artwork for a time. Jaspian is... quite frankly... boring compared to Etheras. I admit it. Etheras is a huge improvement stylistically and in how well-defined his personality is.
Here's where I need YOUR HELP. When I reboot Jaspian, I want him to change him to be more unique and interesting, yet things that artists can do easily. (For example, artists frequently got Jaspian's eye markings wrong, because they weren't well-defined. Same goes for the pattern of his fur. And thus, you got wildly different eye markings and fur patterns / colors.)
So I'd really like to hear your suggestions. Do you have any ideas on styles for Jaspian? For defining his personality some? What are some other characters that Jaspian reminds you of when you look at him? Have you ever wished-for / imagined a fennec with a particular attribute (serious entries, please!) Or in-general: ideas for improving this character? Please leave comments down below. Really good ideas that you think folks might swipe, put those in the notes.
And I can't wait to hear your brilliant ideas. Thanks!
~ Jaspian
Not what you asked for, but figured this was a good a time as any to share my opinion on this.
And his personality is just me. I think I'm okay in terms of being interesting, but I play me every day in real life, and I'd like in fantasy to take a break from that. :P
but it is your choice. perhaps keep with the egyptian
theme and add a scarab or two somewhere. perhaps
a matching one near each eye of the exact same with
a large ankh on the back. who knows, its entirely up to you
the backside then. And some jewelry =3
I do have one idea though...
Make Jaspian, Etheras' twin brother, whereas Etheras is the evil one, Jaspian can be the good guy. Also, I think that Jaspian would look good with some tribal markings.
Like ::JackieFrillove:: said above, I think there should be an interaction between the two characters, but an outright conflict wouldn't work well. Jaspian is a happy and benevolent ruler and it might not put him in the right light if his kingdom was in an outright conflict with his brother. Etheras, on the other hand, is that vicious and would have the cunning and ruthlessness to take over; if he lost, or was held at bay by Jaspian, that weakens Etheras' "baddass-ness." Or might I also suggest, for your consideration, that Jaspian and Etheras are both still princes in the royal court and their vying for influence (Jaspian being honest and noble, Etheras being through intrigue, blackmail and other forms of nastiness) is contained within that arena. One twin is not meant to be inherently better than the other, so they have to be evenly matched (though in different skillsets). I can't recall if Etheras and Jaspian have ever been in the same piece of art, but that would also be interesting to see as well. I look forward to hearing the new art and stories that you come up with.
I did really, really like the older Jaspian art, and especially the (quite frequently used) description of him as "an orange cremesicle." I thought it was an adorable little quirk. You mentioned also how, in Etheras' design, he was supposed to be especially slender and long in the legs and neck; again, why not allow that to transfer over? I feel it would emphasize the similarity between the two characters, and leave enough possibility space in their designs to stress a difference.
Going back to the older Jaspian art, I remember a collection of phrases and exclamations like "Victary!" and "I no has (insert X)?" Again, perhaps that could be kept? I guess what i'm saying is that to make him stand out, you probably could keep a huge amount of stuff that has already been established, and only change a few of the more generic aspects of him. He's already such a well-recognized and (dare I say) classic character.
But to sum up what I'm talking about: You could transfer Etheras' slenderness of the neck and legs to Jaspian, draw the parallel with the Pupil-less eyes and perhaps change their color to green, purple, or blue (really that sandy fur color goes good with just about anything). Also, you could incorporate tweaks in his fur pattern like freckled areas or other subtle visual changes. As someone who watched the change from Jaspian to Etheras, I think the characters are already developed enough separately to be paired together without much lore-related or visual difficulty: I don't think much needs to be done to overhaul him. But, I've said my piece, and am afraid that I've been a little redundant, but I just can't think of what else to suggest.
Anyway, good luck! I await Jaspian's return.
As far as looks I really wouldn't change a thing with either of them, so there's my 2 cents on that.
Oh and sorry about not getting back to you on that note yet. I keep forgetting to do it when I'm free and remembered it when I'm busy. I'll try to (hopefully) send it to you tonight
im not very creative so i cant really think of any changes, i personally love him the way he is, but if you want to change him up a bit, i would love it if you kept the Egyptian theme at least :3 sorry i couldn't be much more help.