Well I have been working on the story and I have reached what seems like a good place to end the chapter (with the characters going to a new place). The problem is that it only took almost a whole page to get there (Two if I add the sample chapter in and call it the full first chapter) and I wanted to know if you want me to keep going or are you ok with the length it is now? Also I am aware that the story might be going too fast. It's eaither that or there isnt enough filler. Should I just add the sample chapter to it and submit it and you guys can give suggestions as to what you would like to see happen next or say what you want to see more of (What goes in in chaos's head/Chaos and Crimsonblood's relationship/more information on how the world works/ect). Let me know and thank you.