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Toa Extreme
8 years ago
This is a weird name that You will listen to me about. The Toa Extreme -following Team Eagle and Team Attack's conflict by birth, but probably preceding the rewritten form of THAT story as I go, and as such making an important part of Furry Islanders History- is my second story idea, the "Generation One" story that kicked off My fantasy game into an area to which I was mostly stuck. The story had many titles: The Matrix Code was one I used the most. It was based on several things, including Bionicle -duh-, especially the first story, Quest of the Toa, and also Sonic X -Super Forms were given to each Toa- and the Classmates I initially thought I would get along with and hang out a lot with, only to be dissapointed, and wake up to the reality that maybe... they aren't worth my time. Originally, there were 8... YES... 8... 7 human and a Kangaroo, and I will not tell You what elements the last 2 are about. One of them is too embarassing to make up even as a kid that age. The other is obvious, but should be forbidden due to there being ONE destined... that. The story was about 7 boys who would travel around the world hunting for Demons, and -in the original version of this idea- Collecting Masks of Power like the real toa, in order to defeat "The MAster of Darkness". Who looked something like this: http://villains.wikia.com/wiki/Master_of_Darkness -of course, I discovered Heart of Darkness, the PC game, late into my Elementary 8th grade, so...- And was just as basic an EVIL entity as You can guess. I guess the idea of "EVIL" I had back then was entertaining to Me. A being of pure evil, it's essence, a force of nature who is evil because EVIL is a part of life, and as such He is evil "For the sake of evil". That kinda villain I kinda like. Gave worth to My life that one day, i would be the "hero" who would save the world from such Evil. My naive mind would not yet realize that the world is not all candy and happiness. I thought that GOOD was basically what most people were, with those out of that mentality being infected with some kind of madness. It was a time I was highly influenced by Christian beliefs -although, I believed in MY own god, rather than the Christian God, because I was a kid and my life would be confused as I grow out of my god-belief, growing into the Atheist who sees the world as it is. But I had to grow into that for a price. A severe price that felt like a piece of my own being was torn out and thrown away. And while a person already labeled Me as "Pessimistic", I think I just became more realistic from the suffering I went through. And it all, in fact, began at the "age" of the Toa Extreme, which I decided I want to involve with my current story. As I probably said earlier in my summary of old stories or journals, I am rewriting many of my old ideas, even ones I did not document, as much as I can, in a way they lead to the world I intend to present to You now.
Other than the TOA EXTREME - Matrix Code story, I also intend recycle things from Starlyasis - Grand Design, things that do not involve the ultimate crossover mindfuckfest of all disney and nondisney cartoon animals or some shit. And the story between Toa Extreme - Matrix Code and Starlyasis - Grand Design, which is like All Dogs Go To Heaven meets Dog City, Jazz Jackrabbit, prohibition era themed gangster movies and Fast and Furious with a little pleasure-lifestyle pursuit thrown in. I do not think I mentioned it. I also want to do something with the Street Racing Revolt story I made up when I was on My Skailla Fanboy stage, where I tried to be original... only to realize I was basically writing My version of Need For Speed. Which also reminds Me of My attempt to "Story" the first six games in the NFS series in the form of a travelling camp of road racing too. So far, Several of my worlds/stories have been mentioned here... Hmm... Do You see a pattern here? War, Toa, Street, Street, War, Haunt, Street, War... War represents stories where Vuk/John is involved in a war, either as a commander figure, or a soldier, or a mercenary, while Street represents street life involving illegal street racing, bounty hunting, dealing, or running from a powerful villainous force (Maffia, Elitist rivals, etc.). Toa represents Vuk/John as a TOA hero or a lone warrior neither involved with a military, or a street related scenario, while haunt marks a hole in my life when Vuk/John was mixed into a struggle with a reality made entirelly out of GIYGAS.... I mean.... Oh well. Interesting that I do not have a Western kinda thing -tho I did involve Indians in Starlyasis - Grand Design back in my worse DA days.- despite it being one of my favorite themes. Oh well, back on track!
Toa Extreme, the story of 6 guys -Removed the kangaroo and the 7th dude due to them being pointless, practically- who never got along, and as soon as they fulfill their "destiny", they turn on each other, and throw away their elemental powers in anger, leaving only one, who would absorb all of the elements into himself and embark on a quest of His own. The story starts as them being normal human teenagers attending their 6th grade of Elementary -Elementary consists of 8 grades in hungary, so if You think it's weird they are 6th graders, understand this-, and one day, one of them, my alter ego, mind You, would meet a Matoran -presented as an alien at this point-, receive the TOA STONES, and share it with some of His classmates -only some males will accept a toa stone of their own, the girls would be busy with something else... just like the girls in my damn class- and embark on a journey on birdback to fight this evil thing and receive their "well deserved" fame and power and shit. Through the adventure, tho, they go on their separate ways and every time one meets the other, something stinks. They are able to utilize the elements against each demon they face very well, since it's apparently easy to do magic. But they honestly do not like each other -except the naive one, He wants friends, and He wants them bad, that's why He delivered those TOA stones to these guys, who urn out to be assholes in the end. Their bodies would go through costant changes inside, due to the elements affecting their bodies in strange ways. Each Toa Extreme would be given an extreme sport at which they excelled -at least most of them-, based on the elements they possessed. There's going to be Hang-GLiding for the TOA X of AIR, for example, and snowboarding for TOA OF ICE, sailing for TOA of WATER, and etc. That would explain the TOA EXTREME title.
As for the changes, I changed a few things:
- There used to be a power with which each TOA would be able to warp reality or teleport at will when they needed to. This power was the MATRIX which was based on the little I knew about the movie "MATRIX", when I wasn't even aware that it takes place in a virtual reality designed to keep human slaves calm in a robot dominated world, and all that crap. The Matrix would be powered by emeralds in my misguided interpretation, and collecting six of them would turn the Toa Extreme into supermode. What I need to change is connected to the name "MATRIX". It was fairly recently that I actually dwelled into the world of that movie -at least enough to know what is going on- and realize the problems using the word "MATRIX" may cause. But I also consider the example when the word "MATRIX" was used in a better form: The Autobot Matrix of Leadership.
- The TOA EXTREME used to wear Kanohi Masks of their own, which were copies of their MATA counterparts, actually. I decided to remove the mask wearing and instead leave the TOA EXTREME bare headed.
- Originally, I intended 8 Toa instead of 6. For obvious reasons, I reduce their numbers to 6, because that's what I should have done to begin with.
So the changes are dealt with. Now, there is going to be things I keep.
- TOA EXTREME
- The Toa Extreme, when in contact with all six power gems, would turn into SUPER versions of themselves -SONIC DOES THAT, Super Saiyans do that- which would render them Mutants. The super forms would be animal-like in nature. This mutation is caused by the initial mutation done by the elements, and the POWER GEMS unique properties would turn these mutations towards a FURRY direction, turning the TOA EXTREME into the first mutants themselves.
- The creatures the TOA EXTREME fights would be Demons. While I do recognise that I'll be dealing with species of "Demons" that would hold no evil, the monster hunting TOA EXTREME would need an enemy satanic in design, and connected to the greater sinister plot that would shape FURRY ISLANDERS. I will probably use DOOM, MIGHT AND MAGIC and other sources to study this kind of enemy.
- The main villain would be based on the representatives of evil in mythology and media, I especially aimed at Lucifer/Satan back when I made up the TOA EXTREME, and despite leaving the reach of Christiandom, I still think I can keep this villain the way I imagined Him, except make him an alien who made a deal with the actual villain whom you know, if You are a fan of Bionicle. I intend this villain to wield a mask based on Bionicle G2's Mask of Ultimate Power. His name should be either Zill (A Middle Eastern word for shadow), Oscure (from spanish Oscuridad), Sombra, Toma (From Slovak Tma) Tywyl (from Welsh tywyllwch), Giza (from swahili Giza), Tenebris (From latin), Ciem (From polish Ciemność), Kadili (from Philipino Kadiliman) Skotad (From Greek Skotádi) Ander (from HINDI andhera), or something like that.
For the TOA, these would be the short descriptions.
Toa of Stone: Very Naive and overly friendly. Needs to grow up. Seeks Self Confirmation or something.
Toa of Earth: Not particularly intelligent, kind of a henchman. Seeks some kind of reward.
Toa of Water: Kind of a maggot. Would rather have others do things than do them himself. Seeks Fame.
Toa of Air: Unfriendly and would rather be alone. Hates the rest. Seeks Fortune.
Toa of Fire: Kind of a control freak with a massive ego. Seeks Power.
Toa of Ice: Probably don't know what to write about Him. Seeks Recognition.
They would need to find six POWER GEMS, which would have some kind of effect. Let's see... Primary effect on left, a randomly picked mutation effect on center then respondent TOA STONE on the right. Note: Mutations are fresh, not much variation occurs yet:
Red Gem: would increase Strenght -Canidae- Responds to Toa Stone of Fire
White Gem: would increase Focus -Felidae- Responds to Toa Stone of Ice
Green Gem: would increase Instinct - Pteropodidae- Responds to Toa Stone of Air
Blue Gem: would increase Stamina -Mustelidae- Responds to Toa Stone of Water
Orange Gem: would increase Speed -Canidae- Responds to Toa Stone of Stone
Black Gem: would increase Sight -Leporidae- Responds to Toa Stone of Earth
Demonoid species assigned for each TOA:
STONE: Arachnid Demonoid with venomous claws. -POISON TYPE-
EARTH: Insectoid Demonoid that digs it's tunnels. -ACID TYPE-
WATER: Swimming Fishlike Demonoid. -SONICS TYPE-
AIR: Flying Gargoyle-like Demonoid -PLASMA TYPE-
FIRE: Massive muscular two legged creature -ELECTRICITY TYPE-
ICE: Quadrupedal, fur covered predator Demonoid -DISINTEGRATION TYPE-
Main Villain (Prince of Darkness)
Kanohi: Ultyma, Mask of Ultimate Power
Elements/Powers: Anger, Fear, Hunger, Gravity, Magnetism, Fragmentation, Fireballs, Shadows, Any demonoid power.
Species: Alien Cyborg, probably Demonoid.
So far, that's all I can tell You about the TOA EXTREME story and what I plan to put in it. Good night, day, morning, afternoon, or whatever, People! I will see You in the next whatever I post.
Other than the TOA EXTREME - Matrix Code story, I also intend recycle things from Starlyasis - Grand Design, things that do not involve the ultimate crossover mindfuckfest of all disney and nondisney cartoon animals or some shit. And the story between Toa Extreme - Matrix Code and Starlyasis - Grand Design, which is like All Dogs Go To Heaven meets Dog City, Jazz Jackrabbit, prohibition era themed gangster movies and Fast and Furious with a little pleasure-lifestyle pursuit thrown in. I do not think I mentioned it. I also want to do something with the Street Racing Revolt story I made up when I was on My Skailla Fanboy stage, where I tried to be original... only to realize I was basically writing My version of Need For Speed. Which also reminds Me of My attempt to "Story" the first six games in the NFS series in the form of a travelling camp of road racing too. So far, Several of my worlds/stories have been mentioned here... Hmm... Do You see a pattern here? War, Toa, Street, Street, War, Haunt, Street, War... War represents stories where Vuk/John is involved in a war, either as a commander figure, or a soldier, or a mercenary, while Street represents street life involving illegal street racing, bounty hunting, dealing, or running from a powerful villainous force (Maffia, Elitist rivals, etc.). Toa represents Vuk/John as a TOA hero or a lone warrior neither involved with a military, or a street related scenario, while haunt marks a hole in my life when Vuk/John was mixed into a struggle with a reality made entirelly out of GIYGAS.... I mean.... Oh well. Interesting that I do not have a Western kinda thing -tho I did involve Indians in Starlyasis - Grand Design back in my worse DA days.- despite it being one of my favorite themes. Oh well, back on track!
Toa Extreme, the story of 6 guys -Removed the kangaroo and the 7th dude due to them being pointless, practically- who never got along, and as soon as they fulfill their "destiny", they turn on each other, and throw away their elemental powers in anger, leaving only one, who would absorb all of the elements into himself and embark on a quest of His own. The story starts as them being normal human teenagers attending their 6th grade of Elementary -Elementary consists of 8 grades in hungary, so if You think it's weird they are 6th graders, understand this-, and one day, one of them, my alter ego, mind You, would meet a Matoran -presented as an alien at this point-, receive the TOA STONES, and share it with some of His classmates -only some males will accept a toa stone of their own, the girls would be busy with something else... just like the girls in my damn class- and embark on a journey on birdback to fight this evil thing and receive their "well deserved" fame and power and shit. Through the adventure, tho, they go on their separate ways and every time one meets the other, something stinks. They are able to utilize the elements against each demon they face very well, since it's apparently easy to do magic. But they honestly do not like each other -except the naive one, He wants friends, and He wants them bad, that's why He delivered those TOA stones to these guys, who urn out to be assholes in the end. Their bodies would go through costant changes inside, due to the elements affecting their bodies in strange ways. Each Toa Extreme would be given an extreme sport at which they excelled -at least most of them-, based on the elements they possessed. There's going to be Hang-GLiding for the TOA X of AIR, for example, and snowboarding for TOA OF ICE, sailing for TOA of WATER, and etc. That would explain the TOA EXTREME title.
As for the changes, I changed a few things:
- There used to be a power with which each TOA would be able to warp reality or teleport at will when they needed to. This power was the MATRIX which was based on the little I knew about the movie "MATRIX", when I wasn't even aware that it takes place in a virtual reality designed to keep human slaves calm in a robot dominated world, and all that crap. The Matrix would be powered by emeralds in my misguided interpretation, and collecting six of them would turn the Toa Extreme into supermode. What I need to change is connected to the name "MATRIX". It was fairly recently that I actually dwelled into the world of that movie -at least enough to know what is going on- and realize the problems using the word "MATRIX" may cause. But I also consider the example when the word "MATRIX" was used in a better form: The Autobot Matrix of Leadership.
- The TOA EXTREME used to wear Kanohi Masks of their own, which were copies of their MATA counterparts, actually. I decided to remove the mask wearing and instead leave the TOA EXTREME bare headed.
- Originally, I intended 8 Toa instead of 6. For obvious reasons, I reduce their numbers to 6, because that's what I should have done to begin with.
So the changes are dealt with. Now, there is going to be things I keep.
- TOA EXTREME
- The Toa Extreme, when in contact with all six power gems, would turn into SUPER versions of themselves -SONIC DOES THAT, Super Saiyans do that- which would render them Mutants. The super forms would be animal-like in nature. This mutation is caused by the initial mutation done by the elements, and the POWER GEMS unique properties would turn these mutations towards a FURRY direction, turning the TOA EXTREME into the first mutants themselves.
- The creatures the TOA EXTREME fights would be Demons. While I do recognise that I'll be dealing with species of "Demons" that would hold no evil, the monster hunting TOA EXTREME would need an enemy satanic in design, and connected to the greater sinister plot that would shape FURRY ISLANDERS. I will probably use DOOM, MIGHT AND MAGIC and other sources to study this kind of enemy.
- The main villain would be based on the representatives of evil in mythology and media, I especially aimed at Lucifer/Satan back when I made up the TOA EXTREME, and despite leaving the reach of Christiandom, I still think I can keep this villain the way I imagined Him, except make him an alien who made a deal with the actual villain whom you know, if You are a fan of Bionicle. I intend this villain to wield a mask based on Bionicle G2's Mask of Ultimate Power. His name should be either Zill (A Middle Eastern word for shadow), Oscure (from spanish Oscuridad), Sombra, Toma (From Slovak Tma) Tywyl (from Welsh tywyllwch), Giza (from swahili Giza), Tenebris (From latin), Ciem (From polish Ciemność), Kadili (from Philipino Kadiliman) Skotad (From Greek Skotádi) Ander (from HINDI andhera), or something like that.
For the TOA, these would be the short descriptions.
Toa of Stone: Very Naive and overly friendly. Needs to grow up. Seeks Self Confirmation or something.
Toa of Earth: Not particularly intelligent, kind of a henchman. Seeks some kind of reward.
Toa of Water: Kind of a maggot. Would rather have others do things than do them himself. Seeks Fame.
Toa of Air: Unfriendly and would rather be alone. Hates the rest. Seeks Fortune.
Toa of Fire: Kind of a control freak with a massive ego. Seeks Power.
Toa of Ice: Probably don't know what to write about Him. Seeks Recognition.
They would need to find six POWER GEMS, which would have some kind of effect. Let's see... Primary effect on left, a randomly picked mutation effect on center then respondent TOA STONE on the right. Note: Mutations are fresh, not much variation occurs yet:
Red Gem: would increase Strenght -Canidae- Responds to Toa Stone of Fire
White Gem: would increase Focus -Felidae- Responds to Toa Stone of Ice
Green Gem: would increase Instinct - Pteropodidae- Responds to Toa Stone of Air
Blue Gem: would increase Stamina -Mustelidae- Responds to Toa Stone of Water
Orange Gem: would increase Speed -Canidae- Responds to Toa Stone of Stone
Black Gem: would increase Sight -Leporidae- Responds to Toa Stone of Earth
Demonoid species assigned for each TOA:
STONE: Arachnid Demonoid with venomous claws. -POISON TYPE-
EARTH: Insectoid Demonoid that digs it's tunnels. -ACID TYPE-
WATER: Swimming Fishlike Demonoid. -SONICS TYPE-
AIR: Flying Gargoyle-like Demonoid -PLASMA TYPE-
FIRE: Massive muscular two legged creature -ELECTRICITY TYPE-
ICE: Quadrupedal, fur covered predator Demonoid -DISINTEGRATION TYPE-
Main Villain (Prince of Darkness)
Kanohi: Ultyma, Mask of Ultimate Power
Elements/Powers: Anger, Fear, Hunger, Gravity, Magnetism, Fragmentation, Fireballs, Shadows, Any demonoid power.
Species: Alien Cyborg, probably Demonoid.
So far, that's all I can tell You about the TOA EXTREME story and what I plan to put in it. Good night, day, morning, afternoon, or whatever, People! I will see You in the next whatever I post.
