Critique requested. I want to improve something.
7 years ago
I don't normally ask for critique. It's not something I'm afraid of if it's constructive, but generally speaking it's not something I seek. I do art stuff purely as a hobby and not as a means to make money or gain employment, so I mostly critique myself.
However...my friend is going to a comic con in July and Jennifer Hale's going to be there. He's said he'll gladly get her autograph for me and I got the idea that I could get a professional print of my Shepard piece and have her sign that.
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/18254221/
Now, overall I'm very happy with how this came out. I know the lips don't look right, I plan on going back into the layers to mess around with those to see if I can make them stand out less.
Can any of you guys point out mistakes that you can see, or things that don't look right? It doesn't necessarily have to be constructive. If you just want to say "The arm looks wrong because..." followed by "but I dunno how to fix it =(" that's fine, but "The arm looks wrong" is a lot less helpful.
I should also point out I'm only intrested in critique on the *colouring*. I didn't draw this, nor did I ink this and more to the point I have no issues with the original drawing, the style nor how it was inked. Those are imutable. It's just colour issues I'm looking for suggestions on.
Also "I think it looks fine!" comments, while appreciated and flattering, are kinda outside of the scope of this journal. It's good if you like it, but I don't wanna know what's good...I wanna know what looks off or wrong =)
Thanks, guys!
However...my friend is going to a comic con in July and Jennifer Hale's going to be there. He's said he'll gladly get her autograph for me and I got the idea that I could get a professional print of my Shepard piece and have her sign that.
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/18254221/
Now, overall I'm very happy with how this came out. I know the lips don't look right, I plan on going back into the layers to mess around with those to see if I can make them stand out less.
Can any of you guys point out mistakes that you can see, or things that don't look right? It doesn't necessarily have to be constructive. If you just want to say "The arm looks wrong because..." followed by "but I dunno how to fix it =(" that's fine, but "The arm looks wrong" is a lot less helpful.
I should also point out I'm only intrested in critique on the *colouring*. I didn't draw this, nor did I ink this and more to the point I have no issues with the original drawing, the style nor how it was inked. Those are imutable. It's just colour issues I'm looking for suggestions on.
Also "I think it looks fine!" comments, while appreciated and flattering, are kinda outside of the scope of this journal. It's good if you like it, but I don't wanna know what's good...I wanna know what looks off or wrong =)
Thanks, guys!
Maybe if you were to slightly 'close that stretch'? I don't really know how else I can describe it. Feel free to give it a shot and see how it looks to you.
Enjoy the autograph!
Other than that, it's fine.