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"Cutting Corners" Suggestions
16 years ago
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Hey, everyone.
First of all, thank you everyone who liked the pilot of my series "Cutting Corners," based on characters my friend
kokuhane made and almost all of FA have come to love. However, I would like to amplify the word SERIES meaning I don't plan on having that pilot being a one-shot story, since I didn't even introduce Joey's character.
But with this, I have come to a snag. The way I wrote the pilot/prologue makes it seem that the initial story arc for Season 1 is going to be mostly set around Joey and Kyle, leaving Stan and Razul as secondary characters. I don't want that. I believe that there is indeed a possibility for all four characters to be primary, yet still be able to write the initial romance origin story for Joey and Kyle I hinted at in the pilot/prologue.
So if anyone has any ideas on how I can go about making Raz and Stan primary along with Joey and Kyle, suggestions would be greatly appreciated. Hell, if I can come up with a sub-plot for the two of them that ties in with the direction I'm going, that would be great, too.
Now originally, I was just planning on asking kokuhane, 
infernous, 
qase, and 
charkonian, since they all experienced the characters in one way or another (btw charkonian, I really enjoyed those small short stories involving you and Razul. Very nicely done, buddy! ^^). But I realized that everyone else has a right to put their two cents in if they genuinely love the characters as much as their creator.
So yeah; I'm open to suggestions of any kind. The last thing I want to do is make a mockery of someone else's work, and I think that's what I'll be doing if I make Razul and Stan secondary characters. Thanks again, guys! ^^
First of all, thank you everyone who liked the pilot of my series "Cutting Corners," based on characters my friend
kokuhane made and almost all of FA have come to love. However, I would like to amplify the word SERIES meaning I don't plan on having that pilot being a one-shot story, since I didn't even introduce Joey's character.But with this, I have come to a snag. The way I wrote the pilot/prologue makes it seem that the initial story arc for Season 1 is going to be mostly set around Joey and Kyle, leaving Stan and Razul as secondary characters. I don't want that. I believe that there is indeed a possibility for all four characters to be primary, yet still be able to write the initial romance origin story for Joey and Kyle I hinted at in the pilot/prologue.
So if anyone has any ideas on how I can go about making Raz and Stan primary along with Joey and Kyle, suggestions would be greatly appreciated. Hell, if I can come up with a sub-plot for the two of them that ties in with the direction I'm going, that would be great, too.
Now originally, I was just planning on asking
kokuhane, 
infernous, 
qase, and 
charkonian, since they all experienced the characters in one way or another (btw charkonian, I really enjoyed those small short stories involving you and Razul. Very nicely done, buddy! ^^). But I realized that everyone else has a right to put their two cents in if they genuinely love the characters as much as their creator.So yeah; I'm open to suggestions of any kind. The last thing I want to do is make a mockery of someone else's work, and I think that's what I'll be doing if I make Razul and Stan secondary characters. Thanks again, guys! ^^
But still, dude. Realizing you could have done better means that you can do better now. Reading how you wrote Razul was one of my inspirations to capture his personality in this story series. Your "pieces of crap" were a definite aid for "Cutting Corners." Believe me! ^^
We just had a "psuedo-anime moment," didn't we? lol
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I came to realization that whenever i'm dealing with characters in the middle of a specific storyline, I tend to draw all the attention on them as opposed to any other characters. Honestly, that was a rather needed wake-up call. So seriously, thanks a lot.