Have been wanting to do some writing for a while, and I think I did pretty darn good. Please check out my newest submission, it may be worth your time! Any constructive criticism (CONSTRUCTIVE, please) is very welcome! I have never done stories before, and I wanted to flex my writing skills. Also, been getting back to drawing again, but ugh I have to get my practice back. Eh it's not like I was some professional, so it should just take a bit of time lol. Also, if there are any better tags I can give the story, let alone a better title, please give me recommendations, thanks!

ANYWAYS, here it is: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/28612894/