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Epic space opera
6 years ago
Hey guys,
So I wrote another story I called "Aspasia". My Naakaanee people are kind of primitive wolf people who have soft and beautiful hearts. I got tired of them being inferior to humans with technology so I created the Lunarii, who are Naakaanee who were seduced by fallen angels but ended up with the technology of the universe (Long story)
Aspasia gives up her immortality to come to Earth (She is a sapient anthropomorphic wolf person) to spend her life with a human man she believes is intertwined with her spirit. (If anyone wants to read the story, note me with your email address and I'll send it to you. I think it might be the first story I publish on Amazon!)
She lives with her mother, Mara, aboard a Galactic Destroyer, a ship that dwarfs our planet, and is capable of passing through planets.
On this ship is a guard, a guard of her people, an eight foot tall muscle bound wolf-guy who calls himself "Thor" by our human mythology (They have seen many, many worlds and many, many peoples. My fursona is based on Thor's people, but unlike him, my race of wolf people are more hedonistic. My friend called the below "An epic space opera")
In the story I make Thor a very manly, attractive, but stoic and sworn to celibacy, because his wife died in battle, he swore never to love another woman again. (Despite two of the most powerful women in the universe wanting him)
I recently came across this song:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jmk5frp6-3Q
It's a very epic song. When I am driving (I like to drive, but mostly for work) my overactive imagination imagines epic scenarios with my characters, and as much as I would like to animate some of them, alas, I cannot.
SO! I decided to do what I do best, which is to write. I wrote an epic space opera! I analyzed the music second by second and came up with a blow by blow scene of Thor, when he lost his wife in battle. I hope you enjoy it, despite the somber note I tried to make it resonate with heart strings.
(The Set are an ancient race of creatures expelled from Heaven who are constantly trying to wipe out the universe)
00:00-00:33- Thor and his wife court, become friends, and eventually marry. Thor gives her his sacred ring, made from the rarest of minerals in the universe, with his familial blood-crest on it.
00:34-00:55 The Set begin amassing and creating an armada to lay waste to planets and civilizations. Their only goal is to destroy all God has created.
00:56- 01:04 The Lunarii begin amassing their own armada in response. Thor and his wife are both warriors and are present.
01:04–01:23 The Set attack. Battle ensues. The battle rages more and more intense.
01:23 – 01:56 Thor's wife and him are separated, she agrees to fight in other corners of the universe, taking an armada with her. The battle rages.
01:57- 02:12 His wife fights a loosing attack. The Set were lying in wait. They have a creature that spits white hot fireballs, her armada suffers heavy losses in that quadrant.
02:13- 02:30 Thor's wife fights valiantly, and bravely, though she is outnumbered. The battle is raging all around her.
02:30- 03:05 His wife is successful in destroying much of the ambushing attackers. She fights, with small numbers, bravely, wiping out many of the Set.
03:06-03:16 His wife is killed by the creature, her ship is destroyed, just when they thought they had the upper hand.
03:17-03:34 Thor gets the distress call and begins hyperdimensional travel to meet her where she was fighting, to help her. He overloads his reactor to get there faster, faster than the rest of the armada.
03:35-04:12 Thor crashes through to her quadrant of the universe, seeing the wreckage of Lunarii ships and Set alike. He scans for life signs, hoping his wife is still alive.
04:13-04:17 Thor finds the wedding band with his family crest on it, broken, and floating in space.
04:17-04:26 Thor is shocked, then enraged. The copilot, the ship's avatar sitting next to him in the cockpit (A hologram, but realistic) senses Thor's rage, and they both begin pushing the reactor past safe tolerances, energizing simultaneous weapons systems.
04:26-04:35 The ship, with it's fireblade technology, plasma cannons, and antimatter energy weapon turn to face the remaining Set, and their monster. The ship is lighting antimatter on fire, and appears to be burning, though through the flames you can see the hull.
04:36-04:43 The Set see the lone ship, and attack.
04:43-04:50 Thor engages the Set, flying through their ranks and ships, slicing through them, setting them ablaze, heading straight for the monster.
04:50-06:00 The remaining Lunarii ships emerge in that embattled quadrant.
06:01-06:15 Thor's ship plunges into the monster, that appears to be made out of liquid magma.
06:16-06:26 Thor's ship blasts through the creature, tearing it in half. His ship is floating in space, badly damaged. Thor himself has passed out, hoping to have joined his wife in the next life.
06:26-06:35 The remaining Lunarii ships drive the Set back into deep space, and a ship finds Thor's damaged Drone.
Final scene: Thor, kneeling at his wife's grave, tears streaming from his broken face, vows never to love another, so long as he lives.
So I wrote another story I called "Aspasia". My Naakaanee people are kind of primitive wolf people who have soft and beautiful hearts. I got tired of them being inferior to humans with technology so I created the Lunarii, who are Naakaanee who were seduced by fallen angels but ended up with the technology of the universe (Long story)
Aspasia gives up her immortality to come to Earth (She is a sapient anthropomorphic wolf person) to spend her life with a human man she believes is intertwined with her spirit. (If anyone wants to read the story, note me with your email address and I'll send it to you. I think it might be the first story I publish on Amazon!)
She lives with her mother, Mara, aboard a Galactic Destroyer, a ship that dwarfs our planet, and is capable of passing through planets.
On this ship is a guard, a guard of her people, an eight foot tall muscle bound wolf-guy who calls himself "Thor" by our human mythology (They have seen many, many worlds and many, many peoples. My fursona is based on Thor's people, but unlike him, my race of wolf people are more hedonistic. My friend called the below "An epic space opera")
In the story I make Thor a very manly, attractive, but stoic and sworn to celibacy, because his wife died in battle, he swore never to love another woman again. (Despite two of the most powerful women in the universe wanting him)
I recently came across this song:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jmk5frp6-3Q
It's a very epic song. When I am driving (I like to drive, but mostly for work) my overactive imagination imagines epic scenarios with my characters, and as much as I would like to animate some of them, alas, I cannot.
SO! I decided to do what I do best, which is to write. I wrote an epic space opera! I analyzed the music second by second and came up with a blow by blow scene of Thor, when he lost his wife in battle. I hope you enjoy it, despite the somber note I tried to make it resonate with heart strings.
(The Set are an ancient race of creatures expelled from Heaven who are constantly trying to wipe out the universe)
00:00-00:33- Thor and his wife court, become friends, and eventually marry. Thor gives her his sacred ring, made from the rarest of minerals in the universe, with his familial blood-crest on it.
00:34-00:55 The Set begin amassing and creating an armada to lay waste to planets and civilizations. Their only goal is to destroy all God has created.
00:56- 01:04 The Lunarii begin amassing their own armada in response. Thor and his wife are both warriors and are present.
01:04–01:23 The Set attack. Battle ensues. The battle rages more and more intense.
01:23 – 01:56 Thor's wife and him are separated, she agrees to fight in other corners of the universe, taking an armada with her. The battle rages.
01:57- 02:12 His wife fights a loosing attack. The Set were lying in wait. They have a creature that spits white hot fireballs, her armada suffers heavy losses in that quadrant.
02:13- 02:30 Thor's wife fights valiantly, and bravely, though she is outnumbered. The battle is raging all around her.
02:30- 03:05 His wife is successful in destroying much of the ambushing attackers. She fights, with small numbers, bravely, wiping out many of the Set.
03:06-03:16 His wife is killed by the creature, her ship is destroyed, just when they thought they had the upper hand.
03:17-03:34 Thor gets the distress call and begins hyperdimensional travel to meet her where she was fighting, to help her. He overloads his reactor to get there faster, faster than the rest of the armada.
03:35-04:12 Thor crashes through to her quadrant of the universe, seeing the wreckage of Lunarii ships and Set alike. He scans for life signs, hoping his wife is still alive.
04:13-04:17 Thor finds the wedding band with his family crest on it, broken, and floating in space.
04:17-04:26 Thor is shocked, then enraged. The copilot, the ship's avatar sitting next to him in the cockpit (A hologram, but realistic) senses Thor's rage, and they both begin pushing the reactor past safe tolerances, energizing simultaneous weapons systems.
04:26-04:35 The ship, with it's fireblade technology, plasma cannons, and antimatter energy weapon turn to face the remaining Set, and their monster. The ship is lighting antimatter on fire, and appears to be burning, though through the flames you can see the hull.
04:36-04:43 The Set see the lone ship, and attack.
04:43-04:50 Thor engages the Set, flying through their ranks and ships, slicing through them, setting them ablaze, heading straight for the monster.
04:50-06:00 The remaining Lunarii ships emerge in that embattled quadrant.
06:01-06:15 Thor's ship plunges into the monster, that appears to be made out of liquid magma.
06:16-06:26 Thor's ship blasts through the creature, tearing it in half. His ship is floating in space, badly damaged. Thor himself has passed out, hoping to have joined his wife in the next life.
06:26-06:35 The remaining Lunarii ships drive the Set back into deep space, and a ship finds Thor's damaged Drone.
Final scene: Thor, kneeling at his wife's grave, tears streaming from his broken face, vows never to love another, so long as he lives.
- Peter
- Peter
- Peter