Haven't had a moment to read yet, but will make some time to today!

Many thanks :)

Haven't finished it yet, but so far am enjoying it! I'm a real stickler for pacing and so far it moves along perfectly! Dialog is also very natural!

One minor question lol, can you bring your side margins in a tad? I keep finding myself re-reading the same line two or three times because the text is so wide lol.

Otherwise it is great! You have some real talent, and look forward to seeing more of what you put out! <3

Thank you so much for your kind words :D

question, the side margins, how much,by what amount? I'm unsure what is the right formatting for writing

Oof that is a tough question. From reading the PDF it looks like they might be at maybe a quarter inch? I'd bump it up to half! Thats just my preference though!

I had it set to 0.5', go 0.75' or 1"?

I'd try .75 then!

ope that wasn't a reply lol

Hey, I uploaded chapter two, with the margin at 0.75, is that better?

Oh yes much better!

Should I do the same for Lost & Found?

I wouldn't be opposed!

Sorry I couldn't offer BETTER input on it lmao