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4 years ago
I'm really sorry to ask this of you all but I was hoping to get feedback and critiques of my stories, specifically regarding:
Characters
Plot
Pacing
Writing style
Structure
and anything of note
Again, I'm sorry to ask but I really want to improve and understand my failings as a writer and tell better stories and entertain you all :)
Characters
Plot
Pacing
Writing style
Structure
and anything of note
Again, I'm sorry to ask but I really want to improve and understand my failings as a writer and tell better stories and entertain you all :)
lobster
~lobster
Well, you already know I am not the best at critique so I cannot offer you much in that regard, but I think you are doing a great job! Your pacing and plot are both fantastic!
