I just wanted to greet you all and ask for a small favor.

I posted a story here and really wanted to get some opinions of it. I've always liked writing but may be a bit rusty since it's been so many years, my skills may need some pointers or critique to better myself.

I know some can't see the story due to the adult rating on there but I put that rating due to the sensitive nature of the storyline involving the death of a character. I felt it was better to be safe than sorry if someone decided the mature rating wasn't strong enough. I apologize for that but if you want to read it anyway I can always send you the file directly. Just ask

Thanks guys!